Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
muhabat ko shuro hony se pehly rok daity hain..
chalo is HUM ko, main or tum yahin pe tok daity hain
Wafa k kachy dhagy se koi misrah peroty hain..
Ghazal banny sy kuch pehly wo dhagy tor daity hain..
zarori tu nahi har nazm ki takmel ho jaye...
chalo is bazm ko younhi adhora chor daity hain..
Mukhatib main agar na hun, tawajjo tum nahi dena
han aisy hi takkaluf pe zara sa zor daity hain...
na phir abad dil my khowahishon ki ho koi basti..
umeedain ibteda hony se pehly tor daity hain..
kahin gardish sitaron ki na phir taqdeer sy khely..
tu hathon ki lakeron sy ulajhna chor daity hain...
Gily shikwy sunaney ka irada tu nahi ab k...
Haqeekat ko bayan kar k, qalam ko tur daity hain...
pareshan ab sawalon sy nahi hona ka tum or main..
kisi anjan manzil pe safar ko mor lety hain...
MEER jaty howy itna faqt usko sikhana tha...
milaty hath tu sab hain magar phir chor daity hain...
neha
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
:nono:
This is nazam not ghazal:(
neha
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
thank you sooo much 
Lamhay
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs388.snc4/45157_119288981456672_100001267129857_138547_6300116_n.jpg
**mein nay jis shaakh ko phoolon se sajaya tha faraz…
mere seenay mein usi pairr ka kanta utra
tu hans raha hai mujhper mera haal dekh ker
mein phir bhi shareeeq teray kehkahon mein hoon
mujhse bichhar kar tu bhi to roye ga umar bhar
ye soch le ke mein bhi teri khwahishoon mein hoon
sab hi apni gharz say miltay hain faraz..
maza tu jab hai k koi bay sabab mila kary,.
kya aisay kam-sukhan se koi guftagu karay
jo mustaqil sakoot se dil laho karay
ab to haimain tark-e-marasim ka gham nahin
per, dil ye chahta hai k aaghaaz tu karay
Tere baghair bhi to ghaneemat hai zindagi
khud ko bhula ke kaun teri justaju karay
Chup chaap apni aag main jalte raho FARAZ
Duniya to Arz-e-haal se be-aabru karay.
**
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
ohhhh sorry...
ab kya karo???
ghazal post karun??
neha
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
ohhhh sorry...
ab kya karo???
ghazal post karun??
haan ji edit ker k ghazal post ker daein :)
Lamhay
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
meri pic kahan gaye cross kyo aya 
neha
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
phir se post kero..pata nahi kiun aya aisa:bummer:
Lamhay
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Amar bail helppppppppppppppppppppp nahi hua phir se kia ............
Lamhay
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
hogaya na?
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Saza Yeh Itni Bari Hay Kahin Se Aa Jao
Ajab shaam khari hai kahen se aa jao
Bari udas ghari hai kahen se aa jao
Kisi se milna aur mil k bichar jana
Saza ye itni bari hai kahen se aa jao
Bara kathan hai ye hijr ka mosam
Judai bol pari hai kahen se aa jao
Zmana jise smjhta ha moteon ki chamak
Wo aansuon ki larri ha kahen se aa jao
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Done ... :)
Lamhay
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
thank you 
ur 
neha
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
v nice 
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
**Excellent contributions all … 
**
Im glad for this great response in very first day of the competition … :k:
gumrah
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Kabhi kabhi yaad main ubharte hain naqsh-e-maazi mite-mite se
Wo Aazmaish dil-o-nazar ki, wo qurbatain si, vo faasile se
Kabhi kabhi Aarzo ke sehra main A ke rukte hain qaafile se
Wo sari baatain lagaao ki si, wo saare unwaan wisaal ke se
Nigah-e-yaar ko qarar kesa, nishaat-o-Gham main kami kahan ki
Wo jab milay hain to un se har baar ki hai ulfat naye sire se
Bahut garan hai ye aish-e-tanha, kahin subak-tar, kahin gawara
Wo dard-e-pinhan ke saari duniyaa rafiiq thi jis ke waaste se
Tumhin kaho rind-o-mustahib main ke aaj shab kaun hai farq aisaa
Yea A ke bethe hain maikade main, wo utth ke aye hain maiqade se
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clad
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Main Bhool Jaaoon Tumhe, Ab Yahi Munaasib Hai
Magar Bhoolna Bhi Chaahoon To Kis Tarah Bhooloon
Ke Tum To phir Bhi Haqikat Ho Koi Khwaab Nahin
Yahan To Dil Ka Ye Aalam Hai Kyaa Kahoon 'kambakht'
Bhula Saka Na Ye Wo Silsila Jo Thaa Hi Nahin
Wo Ik Khyaal Jo Awaaz Tak Gaya Hi Nahin
Wo Ek Baat Jo Main Keh Nahin Saka Tumse
Wo Ek Rawt Jo Hum Mein Kabhi Raha Hi Nahin
Mujhe Hai Yaad Wo Sab Jo Kabhi Huwa Hi Nahin
Agar Ye Haal Hai Dil Ka To Koi Samjhaaye
Tumhe Bhulaana Bhi Chaahoon To Kis Tarah Bhooloon
Ke Tum To phir Bhi Hakikat Ho Koi Khwaab Nahin
LP
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
:k:
Aryaan
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Lamhay
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Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
kiya baat hai sab ki!