Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
:no: mera nai hai:bummer:
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awwwwwwww:hugz:
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neha howcome i dont see tht entry of lamhay:aq:
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Chashma pehna bhool gayeen theen tumhari aik junior bhi agaye hai GS per ab bari mushkil hojayegi tumko pehchannay main
woh kahan gaye tumhari pic woh pari wali?
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
^ Batain banaane ko nahe kaha, competition mein posting karo … 
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kis ka hai parosiyoon kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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ab jo ata hai wohi post kariengey kiya khayal ap ka …
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woh naqli hai 
mujhko pehchanney mai kyon ghalti hogi 
jee jee
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
**sunaa hai log use aankh bhar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai log use aankh bhar ke dekhte hain ** **
so us ke shahr mein kuchh din Thehr ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai rabt hai usko Kharaab haalon se ** **
so apne aap ko barbaad karke dekhte hain
sunaa hai dard kii gaahak hai chashm-e-naazuk uskii ** **
so ham bhii uskii galii se guzar kar dekhte hain
sunaa hai usko bhii hai sheir-o-shaaiirii se sharf ** **
soham bhii maujzay apne hunar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai bole to baaton se phuul jharte hain ** **
ye baat hai to chal baat kar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai raat use chaand taktaa rehtaa hai ** **
sitaare baam-e-falak se utar kar dekhte hain
sunaa hai hashr hain uskii Ghazaal sii aankhein ** **
sunaa hai usko hiran dasht bhar ke dekhte hai.n
sunaa hai din ko use titliyaan sataatii hain ** **
sunaa hai raat ko jugnuu Thehr ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai uskii siyaah chashmagii qayaamat hai ** **
so usko surmaafarosh aankh bhar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai uske labon se gulaab jalate hai.n ** **
so ham pahaarh pe ilzaam dhar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai aaiinaa tamasal hai jabiin uski ** **
jo saadaa dil hain ban-savar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai uske badan ke taraash aise hain ** **
ke phuul apnii qabaaein katar ke dekhte hain
sunaa hai uskii shabistaan se muttasil hai bahisht ** **
makeen udhar ke bhii jalve idhar ke dekhte hai.n
ruke to gardish uskaa tavaaf kartii hai ** **
chale to usko zamaane Thehr ke dekhte hain
mubaalaGe hii sahii, sab kahaaniyaa.N hiin sahii ** **
agar vo Khvaab hai to taabiir kar ke dekhte hain
ab usake shehr mein Thehrein ke kuch kar jaaeiN ** **
"Faraz" aao sitaare safar ker kay dekhte hain**
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jee:chilly: churaya hua
ye bhi hai
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^ LiPpY ... is this a ghazal ... ?
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amarbail whts the diff between a ghazal and a poem?
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Main bhi share ker rahi .. :)**
Koi kaise bikharta hai..!!** ** Koi kaise bikharta hai..!! Agar ye janna chahO Koi kaise bikharta hai....!!
Bikhar k kaise jeeta hai..!!
Chamman mein tum challe jana, Khizaa'n k sard mOsam mein
Wahan pattOn kO dekhO tum
Ya phir ek aainaa le loO, Use pathar pe de maroO
Agar mushkil hO ye bhi tO, Aik phoOl le lena
Hawa k dOsh pe rakhna To phir tum jaan jaO ge,
Koi kaise bikharta hai.... !!**
wah zahaye Naseeb ....................ap ki Beautiful eyes k saath :)
Amarbail G ap pehlay post kardein warna hum sab nay tu harna hai ap ki posting k baad!
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so what is this thn? a poem 
Yeah, do tell us
i dun know 
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Lamhay: This is a pure misunderstanding Lamhay … We have wonderful contributors here who shares lovely poetries like you …
LP: Visit this thread … http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/437263-technical-aspects-terms-and-rules-of-ghazal-writing.html
LiPpY: Please post a ghazal as the one you posted is a Nazam …
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Here is my all time favorite Ghazal..Hope u people like it too..
**kahin chand rahon mein kho gaya, khain chandni bhi bhatak gai
mein charagh wo bhi bujha howa, meri raat kesey chamak gai…
meri dastaan ka urooj tha, teri narm palkon ki chha’oon mein
merey sath tha tujhey jagna, teri ankh kesey jhapak gai…
kabhi hum miley bhi to kia miley, wohi dorian wohi fasley
na kabhi hamarey qadam barhey, na kabhi tumhari jhijhak gai…
tujhey bhool janey ki koshishain, kabhi kamyaab na ho sakin
teri yad shakh-e-gulab hey, jo hawa chali to lachak gai…**
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Sure. i am going to check this thread
n delete my post thn i will share ghuzal again ok
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ap nay tu dil jeet liya wah wah …
Re: Ghazal of the Week Competition
Sure. i am going to check this thread n delete my post thn i will share ghuzal again ok
You can simply edit your last entry
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You can simply edit your last entry
Done Boss , i edited my last entry!