GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

GHAZAL

**Jo mila mujh se wo dushman ban gaya
Ghaaliban chehra ye darpan ban gaya
**
**Ab to saari umr dukhna hai ise
Dard tera dil ki dhaRkan ban gaya
**
**Ab lahu baaqi kahaN hai jism mein
Jo bhi tha ashkoN ka eeNdhan ban gaya
**
**Dil ne jab bhi deed ki kee aarzu
AasmaaN mein eik rauzan ban gaya
**
**Naam tera dil ki raahat tha kabhi
Ab to ik be-naam uljhan ban gaya !
**
**Khush-khayaali meri aadat thi magar
Zehen ab yaadoN ka madfan ban gaya
**
**Har tamanna ashk roti reh gaee
Har sitaara zeib-e-daaman ban gaya
**
**Sha’iroN ki kya qadar hogi k ab !
She’r kehna mehez ik fan ban gaya
**
**Mera aangan eik gulshan tha kabhi
Baad tere khaar ka ban, ban gaya !
**
**Mai-kashi se main bhi naalaaN tha magar
Mai-kada ab mera maskan ban gaya
**
Haaye Zamil ! neend teri kho gaee
Tera bistar nok-e-sozan ban gaya !



Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Ab to saari umr dukhna hai ise
Dard tera dil ki dhaRkan ban gaya
Buhat khub:lajawab:

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Haaye Zamil ! neend teri kho gaee
Tera bistar nok-e-sozan ban gaya !


uffffffhoo buhat khoooooob bhai jaan

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Yeh hoi na bat sunny aysy maza ata hy Urdu shyr ki tareef parhny ka:)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

**Shukria GN **:slight_smile:

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Thanx SN :)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Z!Shukriy aki kai bat hy yeh tu mera farz tha:)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

nice one :lajawab:

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Arai Babwa tumra shairi to bara jaberdust hai.
niceeeeeeee

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Janab Aasif n Gondal !!!
Boaht Bohat shukria :)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

:k:

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Boht khoob Zamil jii :flower1:

thanks for sharing.

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Shukria dF n HH !! :)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

I tried a lot to pick one verse and to compliment, but unfortunately i couldn't found one best, as each and every word of this gazal is awesome.....

GOODWORK

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

mind blowing , amazing , lovely. aisi pyari poetry share karte raha kijiye.

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Is se acha tha k daad hi na d hoti !
**Eik hi jumla har thread mein copy-paste kar k kya hasil hua…# of threads increase ho gaye…konsa medel mila??? **
**Agar alfaaz nahi hain paas to is forum mein aane ki kya zarurat thi ??? :naraz: **

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Poori poem hi achi hay lekin quoted part sab sey acha, thanks for sharing Zamil:-)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

**Naam tera dil ki raahat tha kabhi
Ab to ik be-naam uljhan ban gaya !

***Khush-khayaali meri aadat thi magar
Zehen ab yaadoN ka madfan ban gaya
*

*Har tamanna ashk roti reh gaee
Har sitaara zeib-e-daaman ban gaya
*


Amazing sharing....thnx...!

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

hey Zamil itna dard hai tumhare DIL main
kis ka gham laga rakha hai
by the way thus ghazal is very nice:) :) :) :)

Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"

Thanx 2 u toooo :)
KahaN ghayab hain bhaee???