Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"
Naam tera dil ki raahat tha kabhi Ab to ik be-naam uljhan ban gaya !
Khush-khayaali meri aadat thi magar Zehen ab yaadoN ka madfan ban gaya
Har tamanna ashk roti reh gaee Har sitaara zeib-e-daaman ban gaya
Amazing sharing....thnx...!
Its nice 2 c u here Maham jee :)
Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"
Thanx alottt Abeeha jee for visiting n appreciating 
Puraani ghazal hai jee,
Ab kahaN gham ka Thikaana mera dil
Gham ko ashkoN ki nami darkaar hai
Jab-k meri aankh banjar ho chuki
Dil bhi jaise sang hai, kohsaar hai
Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"
Bohat he umdah ki baat hai janab ki........................... thanks you :)
Re: GHAZAL " Dard Tera Dilki DhaRkan Ban Gaya"
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