GHAZAL ".....Chupke Se"

Zamil · August 26, 2006, 2:50am

GHAZAL

**Mujhe kab aarzu thi ho mera anjaam chupke se ! **
**Tumhaare dard ko hi aa gaya aaraam chupke se ! **

**Saba, khushbu nahi hai ye jise tum mushtahar kar do ! **
**Saba, le jao par dena usey paighaam chupke se ! **

**Udhar aankhein mileeN ham ne idhar dil de dia apna **
**Khareeda dard chori se chukaaya daam chupke se **

**Main tere dhyaan mein gum hoon to sab hi dhyaan rakhte hain **
**Mere aangan mein aati hai hamesha shaam chupke se **

**Jo hum ne waqt-e-aakhir, aakhri ik saans khencha tha **
Lia tha kaaNpte hontoN ne tera naam chupke se !

written MAY 2004

goodnews · August 26, 2006, 3:34am

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**Jo hum ne waqt-e-aakhir, aakhri ik saans khencha tha **
Lia tha kaaNpte hontoN ne tera naam chupke se !

Ishqy Haqiqi liy ajay tu mehsoos hota hy ky akhri waqat main Kalma nesseb ho giya shykar hy Allah ka
Agar Ishqy Mijazi murad lain tu Allah mafi .

fara · August 26, 2006, 7:47am

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**Zamil.. Nice work.

Keep it up!

Fara
**

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 27, 2006, 11:15am

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*Mere aangan mein aati hai hamesha shaam chupke se

Jo hum ne waqt-e-aakhir, aakhri ik saans khencha tha
Lia tha kaaNpte hontoN ne tera naam chupke se ! :(
*

so touching... beautiful.. .. thanks for sharing :)

Muslim_girl_1 · August 28, 2006, 12:31am

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beautiful…:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 28, 2006, 2:04pm

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wah wah sab kaam chupkey sey ho gaey:~) thanks for sharing Zamil, that one is better, hope to see more from your work, aap neya kab likhein gay kuch ?

NikamiJano · August 28, 2006, 3:02pm

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Nice one Zamil :)

Amal · August 29, 2006, 12:12pm

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Bohat khoob Zamil :k: Very nice ghazal. Thanx for sharing

Marbles · August 30, 2006, 10:47am

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Mashallah, acchee tehreer hai.

mehnat se mazeed pukhtagee aye gee.

daad hazir hai.

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 3:57am

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Aks hota hai aa’ine jaisa

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 3:59am

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Thanx Fara jee!

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 4:00am

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*Thanx to u too HH :) *

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 4:01am

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Shukria :k:

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 4:03am

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*Bohat Shukria... :) *

Saif andaaz-e-bayaaN rang badal deta hai
Warna dunia mein koi baat naee baat nahi

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 4:04am

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*Bohat Shukria NJ ! :) *

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 4:05am

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**Barri nawaazish Janab ! **

goodnews · September 8, 2006, 4:05am

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Yeh zindagi hy khocha bulble jaisa

Zamil · September 8, 2006, 4:06am

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**Marbles jee barri ustadana daad d hai aap ne… **
**Bohat shukria… **:k:

qadrifaheem · September 8, 2006, 4:19am

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wah janab wah!

kaleemhk · September 8, 2006, 7:25am

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Bohat khoob janab Amal sb...............:)