GHAZAL ".....Chupke Se"

goodnews · September 8, 2006, 4:46pm

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**Tu Zamil Amal ka nick hi hy:confused: **

Prince_Ali · September 9, 2006, 4:16pm

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very nice :k:

Zamil · September 12, 2006, 12:19pm

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Miyaan jee,
main Amal nahi ZAMIL hoon.

Zamil · September 12, 2006, 12:20pm

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Shukria Prince jee!

Zamil · September 12, 2006, 12:21pm

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Itni mayoos na hon, aaisa nahi hai.

sunny_nicky · September 29, 2006, 9:36pm

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niceeeeeee 111111111111 bhai jaaaaaaaan

being_lonely · September 30, 2006, 1:15am

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:) umda

goodnews · September 30, 2006, 1:28am

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Sachi, yeh keh kr tu dil ki kali khila di Zalim :D

goodnews · September 30, 2006, 1:30am

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** Zalim Takhalus rakhty tu yeh ghalat Fehmi na hoti**:whistling

eye_candy · October 14, 2006, 5:36pm

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mind blowing , amazing , lovely. aisi pyari poetry share karte raha kijiye.

mahamkhan · October 16, 2006, 7:40am

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[QUOTE]
*Main tere dhyaan mein gum hoon to sab hi dhyaan rakhte hain
Mere aangan mein aati hai hamesha shaam chupke se *

Jo hum ne waqt-e-aakhir, aakhri ik saans khencha tha **
**Lia tha kaaNpte hontoN ne tera naam chupke se !

[/QUOTE]
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Very very nice ghazal,Zamil gee,thanks for sharing!

Saud_Musheer · October 16, 2006, 8:05am

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Zamil, you rocks man....

bahot hi mayaari gazal hai dost....

Keep it up....

qasim1980 · October 16, 2006, 9:54am

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agar apni hai to abhi mazeed mehnat ki zaroorat hai.

Zamil · October 16, 2006, 10:53pm

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Bohat shukria Maham jee :)

Zamil · October 16, 2006, 10:57pm

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Thanx Saud Sahab... :)

Zamil · October 16, 2006, 11:09pm

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Ye koi meri pehli sharing to hai nahi janab so is "agar" ka jawab bhi "agar" mein hi hai k agar Sho'ra-e-GupShup mein main ne post ki hai to meri apni hi hai.
Baaqi rahi mehnat waali baat to wo zahir hai k kisi bhi field mein chale jaayeN mehnat k bina kuch haasil nahi hota aur sahi fan-kaar hi wo hai jo kabhi mutma'in nahi hota so mera safar to jaari hai aur jaari rahe ga aakhri she'r likhne tak. Aur ye ghazal to waise bhi kaafi puraani likhi hui hai aur eik maze ki baat ye k main yahan sirf wohi kalaam share karta huN jis mein faults hote hain, baqya kitaab k liye bacha rakha hai.

*Ghazal pe nazar daalne ka bohat shukria janab *:)