GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal September 20, 2007, 3:26am 1

dOob rahi hAin sansien magar Ye gumaan baaQi hAi
aaney ka kisi shakhs K aabhi imkaan baaQi hAi

mUddat hOii eik shakhs Ko biChrey hOye lekin
aaj tak meray dil pe eik niShaan baaQi hAi

wo sayibaan Chin gya tO kOii gham nahii
aAbhi to meray sar pe Ye aaSmaan baaQi hAi

kashtii zara kinarey k Qareeb hii rakhna
bikhrii hOi lehrOn meiN abhi tOofaan baaQi hAi

tUmharey hii ashkOn ney lab sii diye warNa
abhi tO meray dUkhOn Ki daStaan baaQi hAi

ghamOn sey Keh do K abhi na rakht e saffar baandhieN
k abhi tO meray jisam meiN kuch aur jaan baaQi hAi

ja chUkey hAiN sab lOg KhaamOsh pari hAi baStii
magar kisi aas pe eik makeen o makaan baaQi hAi

SunnyBoy September 20, 2007, 3:31am 2

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

buhat khoob :k:

Shab-e-Hijar September 20, 2007, 4:39am 3

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutifullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

deep_ocean September 20, 2007, 6:58am 4

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

very nice Koyal :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh September 20, 2007, 10:04am 5

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

aap saara din Poetry search kerti rehti heiN:cb:
buhat achi ghazal hey Koyal ji, thanks for sharing:-)

Precious_Khan September 20, 2007, 11:24am 6

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

Buhat Khoob ...Thanx for sharing Koyal ji :~)

Koyal September 20, 2007, 1:56pm 7

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

thanks PK :)

Koyal September 20, 2007, 1:57pm 8

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

:halo:

SJ September 20, 2007, 2:47pm 9

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

Nice ghazal koyal............:)

muddii September 21, 2007, 3:23am 10

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

Kis Key Aas Pay Yeh Makeen Baqi Hai:halo4:

*~~*~~*Prom Night Competition*~~*~~*

Prince_Ali September 21, 2007, 3:31am 11

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

bohut khub

Daanie September 21, 2007, 3:41am 12

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

nice sharing :)

sunny_nicky September 21, 2007, 11:35am 13

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

koool

Daagh September 21, 2007, 2:13pm 14

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

nice one koyal jee :)

Koyal September 21, 2007, 5:17pm 15

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

thanks daghoo g long tame no see where have you been :(

chips6 September 21, 2007, 5:48pm 16

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

nice...!

Jhanjharewali September 22, 2007, 12:57am 17

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

bahot khuub- as always Jano :)

Koyal September 22, 2007, 2:45pm 18

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

:)

Koyal September 22, 2007, 2:46pm 19

Re: GhamOn Sey Keh Do K Abhi Na Rakht e Saffar Baandhien

^ Jano :halo: