Asalam-o-Alykum Everyone!!
Kaise hain aap log? I am starting a topic today jis mein every week main aik topic rakha jaa’ey gha …aur us topic pe jo zaida gazal’s post kaRay gha wo member next topic Select karay gha..
So the topic of this week is ***Aa’nkhaiN ***
So what are u waiting for?
Ok! let’s start.
mohabbatoN meiN bhi ka'ee madd-o-jazaR deikhey heiN
saba ki dastak pe toot'tey huwey ghaR deikhey heiN
meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta!
meiN ne thehRey hu'wey paani meiN bhaNwaR deikhey heiN
pat'tey toot'tey heiN to shaakoN ko khooN rulaatey heiN
tum ne khizaaN meiN kabhi ghaor se shajar deikhey heiN!
kisi chamaN ka mujhey koi nishaaN kaheeN na mila
haaN dasht ke saaey meiN ne ta'hadd-e-nazaR deikhey heiN
meiN ne na thakney ka sabaq seekha hey paRindoN se
wo jab miley heiN un ke paRoN meiN safaR deikhey heiN
nasha ho 'ishq' ka ya 'janm-o-janam' ke rishtoN ka
meiN ne dinoN meiN utaRtey ye asaR deikhey heiN
Re: Gazal Topic of the week
With all due respect and you may delete the reply if you do not like it... the above two poems are not about "AaNkhaiN" ... they have a sher each that uses the word and perhaps in the context of the sher, it is about aaNkhaiN but no where in my reading I see the poems are about aaNkhaiN...
sorry could not resist :)
Re: Gazal Topic of the week
lyric of a song i wrote
khoee kohee mager, achanek kush huveen
yeye jagee dou ankhein
manoos hein, yeye diyeye jaisee chilmilatee
yeye heraan dou ankhein
waket ka saya sath liyeye, jaldee bhee deiree kiyeye
yeye khaab dou ankhein
heye aik wada iss ka diya, wohh deikhein door talek
yeye gazal dou ankhein
**Bharkayein Meri Pyaas Ko Aksar Teri Aankhein
Sehra Mera Chehra Hai Samandar Teri Aankhein
Phir Kaun Bhala Daad-e-Tabassum Inhein De Ga
Royein Gi Bohat Mujhse Bicharh Kar Teri Aankhein
Bojhal Nazar Aatin Hain Bazaahir Mujhe Lekin
Khilti Hain Bohat Dil Mein Utar Kar Teri Aankhein
Ab Tak Meri Yaadon Se Mitaye Nahi Mit-ta
Bheegi Huwi Ik Shaam Ka Manzar Teri Aankhein
Mumkin Ho Tau Ik Taaza Ghazal Aur Bhi Keh Loon
Phir Orh Na Lein Khwaab Ki Chaadar Teri Aankhein
Yun Dekhtey Rehna Usey Acha Nahi Mohsin
Woh Kaanch Ka Paikar Hai Tau Patthar Teri Aankhein**
Niceeeee :k:
suna hai shahaR maiN zakhmi diloN ka maila hai
chalaiN gaiN hum be magaR pairhaN rafoo kar kay
musaaft-e-shab-e-hijraaN k baad bhaid khula?
hawa dukhi hai chiraago0'N ki aabro kaR kay
zameeN ki payas usi k lahOo ko chaat gaieY
wo khush huwa tha samandaaR ko aabjoO kar kay
ye kis ne hum se lahOo ka kharaaj phiR manga?
abhi tu sooYe thay maqtal ko surkharoO kaR kay
ujaaR ruut ko gulabi banaieY rakhti hai
hamaRi ankH teRi deed se wazOo kaR kay
koi tu habs-e-hawa se ye pochta "mohsiN"
mila hai kia usay kalioOn ko be-namOo kaR kay
Not a ghazal though :D but hopefully all will like it :)
Teri Ankhon Se Hi Khulte Hain Saveron Ke Ufaq
Teri Aankhon Se Hi Band Hoti Hai Ye Seep Ki Raat
Teri Aankhen Hain Ya Sajde Main Hai Masoom Namazi
Palken Khulti Hain to Youn Goonj Ke Uthti Hai Nazar
Jaise Mandir Se Jaras Ki Chale Namnaak Hawaa
Aur Jhukti Hain To Bas Jaise Azaan Khatm Huee Ho
Teri Ankhen, Teri Thahri Huee Ghamgeen See Ankhen
Teri Ankhon Se Hi Takhleeq Huee Hai Sachchai
Teri Ankhon Se Hi Takhleeq Huee Hai Ye Hayat
(Gulzar)
Har tarah ke jazbaat kaa elaan hain aankhain...
Shabnam kabhi, shola kabhi, toofaan hain ankhain
Aankhonn sayy barra koi taraazo nahiin hotaa...
Tulta hai bashr jis main wo meezaan hain ankhain
Aankhain hi milaati hain zamane main dilon ko
Anjaan hain hum tum agar anjaan hain aankhain
Lab kuch bhi kahain is se haqeeqat nahin khulti
Insaan ke sach jhoot ki pehchaan hain aankhain
Aankhain naa jhukein tairi kisi ghair ke aage....
Duniya main bari cheez mairi jaan hain aankhain
Khvaab-nagar hai aankhen khole dekh rahaa huuN
us ko apnii jaanib aate dekh rahaa huuN
kis kii aahaT qarya qarya phail rahii hai
diivaaroN ke rang badalte dekh rahaa huuN
kaun mire jaaduu se bach kar jaa saktaa hai!
aaiinaa huuN, sab ke chehre dekh rahaa huuN
darvaaze par tez havaaoN kaa pahraa hai
ghar ke andar chup ke saaye dekh rahaa huuN
jaise meraa chehraa mere dushman kaa ho
aaiine meN Khud ko aise dekh rahaa huuN
manzar manzar viiraanii ne jaal taane haiN
gulshan gulshan bikhre patte dekh rahaa huuN
manzil manzil hol meN Duubii aavaazeN haiN
rastaa rastaa Khauf ke pahre dekh rahaa huuN
shah’r sangdlaal meN “Amjad” har raste par
aavaazoN ke patthar chalte dekh rahaa huuN
**ankhoon se kaho khamoosh raheiN
ik doojey se hum bichur chuley
gu aaj se bilkul ujur gaey
ub jeewan hoga zindaan sa
ub yaadein rooz satayingi
ub saansein ruk ruk aayeingi
ub raat ko daer se sooyeinge
ub neend se uth uth rooyeingey
per zabt hai ub laazim chanda
is lumhey ashk bahaao mut
tum dil ko aur jalaao mut
yeh zamkh wafa chup chaap sahein
ankhoon se kaho khamosh rahein **
***qissaa mere junoo'N ka bahut yaad aa'ey gaa
jab-jab koee chiraagh hawaa mein jalaa'ey gaa
raaton ko jaagte hain, isee vaaste ki khwaab
dekhegaa band aankhein to fir laut jaa'ey gaa
kab se bachaa ke rakkhee hai ik boond oss kee
kis roz too vafaa ko meree aajmaa'ey gaa
kaaghaz ki kashtiyaa'N b bari kaam aa'eyaiN gee
jis din hamaare shahar meiN sailaab aa'ey gaa
dil ko yakee'N hai k sar-e-rahguzaar-e-ishq
ko'ee fasurdaa dil ye ghazal gungunaa'ey gaa***
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AnkhaiN Bheeg Jati HaiN
samandar maiN utarta hooN to ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
teri ankhooN ko parta hooN to ankhaiN bheeg jati ha
tumhara naam likhnay ki ijzat chiN gai'ye jab se
koi be lafz likhta hooN to ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
teri yadooN ki khushboo khirkioN maiN raqs karti haiN
teray gham maiN sulagta hooN tu ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
najanay ho gia hooN is qadar hsaas maiN kaab se
kisi se baat karta hooN to ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
maiN sara din bohat masroof rahta hooN magar junhi
qadam chokhaat pay rakhta hooN to ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
teraY koochaY se ab mera ta'aluq wajbi sa hai
mager jab be guzarta hooN to ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
hazaroon mousamooN ki hukmrani hai meray dil per
wasi maiN jab hansta hooN tu ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN
Re: Gazal Topic of the week
w0w.. beautiful collection..
main kia share karoon.. 
apni poem share ker saktay hain?
wo ghazal nahi hai nazm hai 
Asalam-o-Alykum Everyone!! Kaise hain aap log? I am starting a topic today jis mein every week main aik topic rakha jaa'ey gha ...aur us topic pe jo zaida gazal's post kaRay gha wo member next topic Select karay gha..
So the topic of this week is **Aa'nkhaiN ** So what are u waiting for? Ok! let's start.
aesi copy paste ka kya faaida hey :-p
I think aik Ghazal ya nazm ho lekin end pe Polling kar leiN best Poem
anyhow :-)
Re: Gazal Topic of the week
:ASA:
Zara Si dair Ko Aa'ey Thay Khvaab **Aankhoo'n* Main
Phir Us Kay Baad Musal'sal Azaab Aankhoo'n Main
Vo Jis Kay Naam Ki Nisbat Say Roshan Tha Wujood
Khattak Rahaa Hay Wahee Aaftab Aankhoo'n Main
Jinhain Mata-e-Dil-o-Jaan Samajh Rahay Thay Hum
Woh Aa'eenay Bhi Hovay Bayhijaab *Aankhoo'n Main
*
Ajab Tarah Ka Hay Mausam Keh Khaak Urr'tee Hay
Woh Din Bhi Thay Keh Khilay Thay Gulaab Aankhoo'n Main
Mayree Ghazal Tayree wehsahtoo'n Ki Khair Ki Hay
Buhat Dinoo'n Say Buhat Iztarab Aankhoo'n Main
Na Jaanay Kaisee Qayamat Ka Paish-Kheema Hay
Yeh Uljhanain Tayree Bay-intisaab** Aankhoo'n Main