Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN
is dard ka yahaaN koi hal sochey nahi milta

reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta

insaanoN ke selaab meiN apnoN ko sambhalo
jo kho gaya ik baar wo to mar ke nahi milta

so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta**
…(Amal)

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reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta

wah wah
bohat khuub Amal ji :-)

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Shukriya ~Nazish~:)

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Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

beautiful ** Aymal ** no wording again..:flower1:

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*reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta *

wah kya baat he is sher kii to...really beautiful...kuch ajeeb sii chiiz hai is mein..no words 4 dat.

so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta

wah!

kyaa baat hai Amal jii. Keep up the good work!
:)

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Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN
is dard ka yahaaN koi hal sochey nahi milta

reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta

insaanoN ke selaab meiN apnoN ko sambhalo
jo kho gaya ik baar wo to mar ke nahi milta

so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta

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*so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta *
its true :)

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achhi ghazal hai magar hamaare Amal sahab ke standard se thoDi kam hai..
however..a good ghazal...
daad kubul kijiye Amal sahab.....

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ek ek lafz ko bahut hi khobsurti se shaeri ka rang ata kiya hai apne amal ji... bahut hi umdah kavish hai apki.

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Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

Buhat khoob :k:

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Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

boht achee ghazal hei :):k:

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bhut khoobbb :k:

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Re: Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

I wish I could understand the language of dots!

Thanx a lot Pramod:slight_smile: Is meiN kuch khaas nahi tha isi leeye isey ziadaa tawaalat bhi nahi di. MeiN to shaed isey post bhi na karta, lekin bas aesey hi khaana-puri ke leeye, aek post aur sahi :slight_smile:
Thanx anyway for your frank comment, it’s always welcome:)

NikamiJi “no wording again” ke leeye shukriye ke bohat saarey words hamaari taraf sey. Khuda aap ki vocabulary meiN izaafa karey. Aameen:)

weteyes82, ullujii, Bhooli Bisri, Cap, Masoom Muskaan and nikii, pasandeedgi ke leeye be’had shukriya:flower1::slight_smile:

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beautiful Amal :k::k:

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bohat khoob amal ji…:k:

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Beautiful.... like always....

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Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

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Originally posted by Amal: *

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reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta
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............................................................(Amal)

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Sab se ziyada ye shair pasand aaya. :-)

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Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *

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Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN
is dard ka yahaaN koi hal sochey nahi milta

reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta

insaanoN ke selaab meiN apnoN ko sambhalo
jo kho gaya ik baar wo to mar ke nahi milta

so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta**
............................................................(Amal)


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Wah...very true

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~beautiful~

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buhat khub Amal g