Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

Dr.Sahiba · February 26, 2003, 9:17am

boohat achi khoosih hay.kep it up.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 26, 2003, 2:36pm

Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

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Originally posted by Amal: *

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reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta

so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta**
............................................................(Amal)

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Hmmm Aap Dil say dhoonday naa : ~)
Aur weisay as you know keh Dhundnay say tou Khuda Bhii Mil jaataa hay:-) well A Nice Ghazal, keep it up& Thanks for sharing with us.

Amal · February 26, 2003, 3:08pm

Re: Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

Dhoondney sey Khuda to mil jaata hey, …“man ka magar meet…” (???)
… Anyway, thanx a lot Gul for liking the ghazal

Dr. Sahiba, tunhaye, Jharna~jhankar, P}{ä®mä©Ï§t, ~Sehar~, Dilsay, &Passionate, and ***** Vivacious *, pasandeedgi ke leeye aap sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya:flower1:

WiseGuy · February 26, 2003, 4:14pm

Re: Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

Acha, hum aap ko eik dictionary bhijwa detay hai, theek

WiseGuy · February 26, 2003, 4:17pm

Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

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Originally posted by Amal: *

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Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN
is dard ka yahaaN koi hal sochey nahi milta

reh reh ke mil jaatey heiN kuch ajnabi chehrey
jisey dhoondney niklo wo dhoondey nahi milta

insaanoN ke selaab meiN apnoN ko sambhalo
jo kho gaya ik baar wo to mar ke nahi milta

so log takar jaatey heiN har aek qadam par
man ka magar meet to maaNgey nahi milta**
............................................................(Amal)
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bilkul sach kaha,
Bohat khoob Amal :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 26, 2003, 5:05pm

Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

bohut khobsorrat:k::k:
boht khobsorat istamal kia hai lafzo ke:k:
thanks:)

guybrush · February 26, 2003, 5:10pm

bahut khoob :k:

chand_chehra · February 26, 2003, 9:52pm

very nice :k:

anthropologist · February 26, 2003, 10:42pm

LAFZOON KA CHUNAO BOOHAT ACHA HAI.
SHER BHI ACHI TARAH MOZOON KIYA GAYE HAI.
A CREDITABLE PIECE OF POETRY.

aadhoorighazal · February 26, 2003, 11:45pm

Re: Re: Re: Firaaq ka taryaak ho ya wisaal ki duwaaeiN

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

I wish I could understand the language of dots!

ji !! and I wish you could understand ANY language.............

Koyal · February 27, 2003, 9:18pm

Guest7777 · February 27, 2003, 10:40pm

great job again amal :k: …but itnee mayoosi kyon i think the person we are looking for is there hum hi nahi dhoond patai … most of the times

Koyal · February 27, 2003, 11:19pm

kidher hai kidher hia batao batao koyal ko be dekhna..

HAMMAD · February 28, 2003, 12:02pm

:k:

HAMMAD · February 28, 2003, 12:10pm

:k:

Amal · February 28, 2003, 1:59pm

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*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *

ji !! and I wish you could understand ANY language.............
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I am no linguist...sorry:(

Amal · February 28, 2003, 3:14pm

Poetry is all about playing with words and perspectives. Every piece of poetry is an experiment. Since we don’t have oceans of topics, we have to write about the same things yet in different wordings. “Mayoosi” is part of the drama we are staging. Isn’t it? Anyhow, thanx a lot for your views:)

Hammad ‘angoottha’ dikhaaney ke leeye bohat
bohat shukriya…here is a for you:)

Jharna_jhankar · February 28, 2003, 4:54pm

bahot hi umda ~

Guest7777 · March 2, 2003, 3:36am

yeah i guess you are right in your own way Amal at some point in our lives we all feel mayoos and helpless thought this feeling doesn't always last but it is one of the stages a wakti kafiyat ...

Galaxy · March 2, 2003, 4:39am

nice one:k: