Faisala

[Sheal]

**"Faisala "

**Aadha rasta tay ker aaya
Ab kia sooch raha hai akhir
Anjani manzil ki janib
Chalta jay
Ya wapis ho jay rahi !
Sooch kay hi aaghaz kia tha
Soo rastoon main aik chuna tha
Or ab sooch hi rok rahi hai
Aagay bhi kuch tareeki hai
Loot kay jana bhi mushkil hai
Sooch ka soraj doob raha hai
Aisay rahi ki manzil hai aadha rasta

[NikamiJano]

Re: Faisala

baRa ookha rasta :( nice sharing :)

[SJ]

Re: Faisala

@Sheal

"Faisala "

Aadha rasta tay ker aaya Ab kia sooch raha hai akhir Anjani manzil ki janib Chalta jay Ya wapis ho jay rahi ! Sooch kay hi aaghaz kia tha Soo rastoon main aik chuna tha Or ab sooch hi rok rahi hai Aagay bhi kuch tareeki hai Loot kay jana bhi mushkil hai Sooch ka soraj doob raha hai Aisay rahi ki manzil hai aadha rasta

Hmmm......
*wel Khoob Kaha hai Shair nay.....:( *

[Prince_Ali]

Re: Faisala

acha faisla hai, i mean, achi poem hai :k: :k:

[redidentity]

Re: Faisala

nice.. :)

[AQ]

Re: Faisala

aadha rasta manzil?

that's sorrowful but truth of life ..