ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath...

ab key ehad kia hay
ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath
teri yaddon key sooraj ko bhi alwida ker doon ga

ab key baad rat-jagoon ka yeh safar
chaand ko tanha hi taye kerna ho ga.

mein terey jhootey sachey lafzoon sey banney
kachey pakkey rishtun ki kamzoor doori ko
key jissey joortey joortey khud toot gya hoon

ussey khud hi toor daloon ga
key bohat jheel lia dard
teri majboorion key hijaboon ka
kissi kitab mein rakh key
bhooley hovey murjhaye gulaboon ka

yaqeee’N aur bey yaqeeni ki
aankh machooli sey bantey
taptey hovey siraboon ka

teri wapsi ki rah takti
pathrayee hoi aankhoon ki palkoon per
bikhrey hovey chand khawaboon ka
na khatam hooney waley azaaboon ka

ab ki baar khushion ki pehli kirn
merey dil mein phootey gi
aur naye saal ki pehli sehar
merey ander key sab aansoo nikaal ker
dharti ki goud shabnam sey bher dey gi

  • by chodhry


bohat achai.....thanks for sharing.....:)

ab key ehad kia hay
ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath
teri yaddon key sooraj ko bhi alwida ker doon ga !!!

thank you swera...:)

Ahhh its beautiful :k:

:bravo:

thank you atif bhai. :slight_smile:

humm
yeh bhi kar kay daikh lain.

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
humm
yeh bhi kar kay daikh lain.
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:)

:k:

thank you for liking cuteepie :slight_smile:

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
humm
yeh bhi kar kay daikh lain.
[/QUOTE]

jee zaroor kioon nahien....

aaap ney bhi ager kabhi kerna ho tu bataye ga mujhey

aik jaam oor …hummmmmm :mudhosh: talkii may main ddhontt’tay hain un shireen labon ka khumaar. :blush:
khair to hum keh rahay thay .. Bhai Chodhry aap tthand rakhain.. hum kuch karnay karanay ke mood main bilkul nahi hain … Buss aik jiwan tha so hum nay waar dia.

*ab key baad rat-jagoon ka yeh safar
chaand ko tanha hi taye kerna ho ga.

mein terey jhootey sachey lafzoon sey banney
kachey pakkey rishtun ki kamzoor doori ko
key jissey joortey joortey khud toot gya hoon
ussey khud hi toor daloon ga
key bohat jheel lia dard
na khatam hooney waley azaaboon ka*

beautiful kiya baat hai :k::k:

Re: ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath...

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*Originally posted by chodhry: *

ab ki baar khushion ki pehli kirn
merey dil mein phootey gi
aur naye saal ki pehli sehar
merey ander key sab aansoo nikaal ker
dharti ki goud shabnam sey bher dey gi

  • by chodhry

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love that part.Very nice. ty for sharing.

Thank you Vivo n MQ :)

kis pey waar diya aap ney apna jeeven :wink:

*sigh

wah beautiful:flower1:

thank you BrokenSky :slight_smile:

Great brother :k:

Yaar, I think if you ppl kept writting such good poems, that might intice me to start writting too. :smiley: Phir Poetry forum ki shamat aa jaye gi. :wink:

Re: ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath…

december alwida ;-)???

nice:k:

Very well written :k: