ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath...

DiYa · January 2, 2004, 7:16pm

hamaysa ki tara
......wa kia kah gay..

Azad · January 2, 2004, 8:35pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

kis pey waar diya aap ney apna jeeven ;)

*sigh
[/QUOTE]

Pata nahi

Sehar · January 2, 2004, 9:18pm

Bohat khoob! :)

chodhry · January 3, 2004, 5:55am

~Sehar~ : Thankyou Sehar, its nice to see that you have felt some warmth in my words and decieded to leave an encouraging note. I really feel honored and hope you will continue this practice.

DiYa* : I am flattered. what else cani say

Capricorn thankyou sir jee

Anwaar Qureshi hmmmmmmmmmmm… now tht really means something to me Thanks Anwaar bhai!!! aur btw december aaap hi key liye nahien utra tha
Alwida aye December :~)

Black Mamba yaaaaaar!!! poetry forum udaas hey mamba sey kuch tu kaho

kahien tu… yaaaar aaap ayoo na ham tu chatey hein yeh shamat rooz rooz aye

chodhry · January 3, 2004, 5:56am

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*Originally posted by Azad: *

Pata nahi
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hmmmm

Azad · January 3, 2004, 7:47am

Bohut khoob :k:

fizion · January 3, 2004, 8:32am

:D
nice chodhry sahab...

Code_Red · January 3, 2004, 9:09am

Nice and neat :k:

Good work Achi nazam hai

Zakhmi_Umar · January 3, 2004, 10:04am

Re: ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath…

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

ab ki baar khushion ki pehli kirn
merey dil mein phootey gi
aur naye saal ki pehli sehar
merey ander key sab aansoo nikaal ker
dharti ki goud shabnam sey bher dey gi

by chodhry

Chodhry sb buhat ache :k: thanx for sharing

HAMMAD · January 3, 2004, 10:47am

:k:

Nickless · January 3, 2004, 11:49am

impressive chaudhary ji... i'd say great work~! .. so you are a sensitive one.. how come you are a chaudhary and this much sensitive? :D jus kiddin... itz really nice :-)

diyah · January 3, 2004, 12:58pm

Philanthrope · January 3, 2004, 1:39pm

What a brilliant work Ch. Sahab.. Mujhe waqae bohat pasand aae hai.. Lovely Start of the new year I must say :k: Likhtay rehye aap aik acha izafa hain..

bao_bihari · January 4, 2004, 1:01am

Re: ess saal ki aakhri dhalti shaam key saath...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

ab key baad rat-jagoon ka yeh safar
chaand ko tanha hi taye kerna ho ga.

ab ki baar khushion ki pehli kirn
merey dil mein phootey gi
aur naye saal ki pehli sehar
merey ander key sab aansoo nikaal ker
dharti ki goud shabnam sey bher dey gi

by chodhry [/QUOTE]

good one.......mashallah....acha hoa aap k aqal aa gae ... :D

ChicagoBase · January 4, 2004, 9:30pm

Wah ustaad wah what a great poem.

JonyBr · January 4, 2004, 9:43pm

Thambs up

bao_bihari · January 5, 2004, 1:06am

moderator bhai…thambs kia hota hay…?

JonyBr · January 5, 2004, 2:48am

Oye yaar spelling ki galtiyaan na nikala karo

Golden_Scorpion · January 5, 2004, 3:32am

Good One

Keep it up

Philanthrope · January 5, 2004, 2:51pm