Escape

[zobia]

Re: Escape

@tariqlkhan

Here is my approach

This is what I wrote in 1989, your chachi was in crib and you were not even born
(I dont do things in English, apni zubaan urdu. Yo umay have to write it in urdu first to read it properly)

This is just first two stanza, can post the whole thing some other time

MaiN to aaNsoo’on kay safar main hooN
MaiN to raah-e-deeda-e-tar main hooN
Mujhay dhoondnay koo’ee kiyaa chalay
Main to khud, khudee kay safar main hoon

Kabhee dhool maiN, kabhee Khaak maiN
Kabhee taar-e-daaman-e-chaak main
Mujhay mill gaa’eeN meri manzilaiN
youNhee aalam-e-bebaak maiN

good thing: u have realization of wats ur purpose in this world is, which perhaps many of us lack.

bad thing: second stanza should come before the first one.
is safer k khatum honay ka intezar mut kege ga. yeh safer to her aik ka safer hai, albata ag-a-heya bhut kum logoon ko hoti, ya phir hoti hai to waqt nahi hota.

so i say stop on poetry…n MOVE ON!!!

ps. meray acha lagnay ya na lagnay say kuch ferk nahi perta. yahan bhut saray app ko pazerai day saktay hain.

may kia
meri zaat kia
yeh to khuda he he hai
jis nay mujhay buneya

Zaberdast chachu!!!..chachi i have to give him points. he proved his multi dimensionality