Escape

[hin33]

Escape to a place

where the nights were darker .. days were brighter ..

evenings clearer, quieter than quiet ..

time passed slowly and moments were longer…
when things were real and were valued much higher

there was a sense of weight in every object that life carried..
colors were never neon.. only rich and lush extracted from nature

disease meant actual pain ., death was totally uncontrolable..

where hearts beat with rhythm of feelings .. when feelings existed with less confusion..
food wasnt your biggest rival.

and the ruffles of pure cotton made a sound on the unpaved streets …

thats where

i want to go

thats where

i want to be

i.e., the olden times ..

i hate the industrial revolution

[TLK]

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Very deep miss hin33

You need to get out of NY , move to Milwaukee (Some parts of Seattle are not bad either :D)

Btw, quite an expressionist you have with in you. Very impressibe

Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur bhi ziyaada

[hin33]

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walking on .. walking on..

brokennnn glassss

[Hum_Hain_Lajawab]

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Bery bery interesting

[hin33]

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@Hum_Hain_Lajawab

Bery bery interesting

tum .. roza tor lia?

hooooooooooooo

[zobia]

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i thought we r talking about Enrique’z Escape

[zobia]

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sorry chachi per meray ko yeh talaah-e-gumshuda ka istehar lag raha hai.

i gonna rite more to mock u’r points. but wana see other approaches.

[TLK]

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@zobia

sorry chachi per meray ko yeh talaah-e-gumshuda ka istehar lag raha hai.

i gonna rite more to mock u’r points. but wana see other approaches.

That is all the approach your chachi has. She is pretty single minded. Main to phuNs gaya is kay saath, fuzool maiN

[zobia]

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@tariqlkhan

That is all the approach your chachi has. She is pretty single minded. Main to phuNs gaya is kay saath, fuzool maiN

chachu app phans dono terf say gayea hain. u rote impressive.

so now i ask how? :D…show me wat depth u may offer to the same approach of my kool chachi

p.s. art ko bananay wala kum phansta hai, but tte ppl who crticize that this piece works or it doesnt. wohi loog phanstay hain.

[hin33]

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That is all the approach your chachi has. She is pretty single minded. Main to phuNs gaya is kay saath, fuzool maiN

acha zara bad main mileey ga..

---

zobi.. kia na .. meri itni azeem azad shairi ko

khair ..
tum bachi ho.. ull get it when you are older..

we will surely disscuss enrique.

oh how abt enrigue iglesias , kitta cute hai na ..

oops chachu waching..

[hin33]

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@zobia

chachu app phans dono terf say gayea hain. u rote impressive.

so now i ask how? :D…show me wat depth u may offer to the same approach of my kool chachi

p.s. art ko bananay wala kum phansta hai, but tte ppl who crticize that this piece works or it doesnt. wohi loog phanstay hain.

thats my girl

[TLK]

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so now i ask how? :D......show me wat depth u may offer to the same approach of my kool chachi

Here is my approach

This is what I wrote in 1989, your chachi was in crib and you were not even born
(I dont do things in English, apni zubaan urdu. Yo umay have to write it in urdu first to read it properly)

This is just first two stanza, can post the whole thing some other time

MaiN to aaNsoo’on kay safar main hooN
MaiN to raah-e-deeda-e-tar main hooN
Mujhay dhoondnay koo’ee kiyaa chalay
Main to khud, khudee kay safar main hoon

Kabhee dhool maiN, kabhee Khaak maiN
Kabhee taar-e-daaman-e-chaak main
Mujhay mill gaa'eeN meri manzilaiN
youNhee aalam-e-bebaak maiN

[hin33]

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@tariqlkhan

Here is my approach

This is what I wrote in 1989, your chachi was in crib and you were not even born
(I dont do things in English, apni zubaan urdu. Yo umay have to write it in urdu first to read it properly)

This is just first two stanza, can post the whole thing some other time

MaiN to aaNsoo’on kay safar main hooN
MaiN to raah-e-deeda-e-tar main hooN
Mujhay dhoondnay koo’ee kiyaa chalay
Main to khud, khudee kay safar main hoon

Kabhee dhool maiN, kabhee Khaak maiN
Kabhee taar-e-daaman-e-chaak main
Mujhay mill gaa’eeN meri manzilaiN
youNhee aalam-e-bebaak maiN

this is soo mushkillll

y b so mushkill

waisay it sure sounds nicer

[TLK]

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That is what I said. Khud say urdu may lik laiN eik eik lafz (jub time ho, tub). Waisay maybe I can upload an image file

[hin33]

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so what inspired u to write such a heavy piece

yea aalam e bebaak kider hai ..

:P

[TLK]

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so what inspired u to write such a heavy piece

yea aalam e bebaak kider hai ..

:P

Both questions, dont know the answer. I guess, buk raha hooN junooN maiN kiya kiya Kuch walee baat thee

[Minerva]

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not bad Tariq, yeh baray baray kaarnamay junnun ki halat main he sarzad hotay hain. Do share more of what you have written with us.

[TLK]

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not bad Tariq, yeh baray baray kaarnamay junnun ki halat main he sarzad hotay hain. Do share more of what you have written with us.

Thanks Miner.. but that really belongs to poetry section. I will do that over there

[hin33]

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Both questions, dont know the answer. I guess, buk raha hooN junooN maiN kiya kiya Kuch walee baat thee

yani k

oh let me share this urdu song i translated into english for this singer daanish rahi ..

actually its more of a thought of his video.. he wanted to put on his site..

sorry for the boring read..

but it's my work na :)

'Chalo merey saath' is an endeavor to salvage a dying relationship connecting two individuals. The effort is made from both sides; both await reconcile but cant find a way to it. Life is an excursion, which remains in-vain without each other's existence...

The lyrics go something like

Come into my life , my love
Leave all behind . just come with me and 'live' what you call life

let my curiosity roam and seek
let it explore you and know you

know you . so i may never lose you

Those cherishing moments

let those not fade away
without you life is a warren in wilderness
come into my life
so we find our ways together

Enduring excitement of chance repeats itself in the beat along with the initiative. The relationship in the end is referred to a machine that crashes and anticipates a new start. The uncertainty and chance remains...

[Minerva]

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^ good and at the sametime, quite melancholy...sigh