~Ek Ghazal~

**Meinay Tumko Perkha bhee aur jana bhee
Dhoop mein chalker sayee ko pehchana bhee

Meray laboon pay aaj tu koi geet nahi
Bhool gayein hun mein tu ab wu zamana bhee

Yadoon ki dehleez pay betthi Sochti hun
Ab tu rasta tanha hay, anjana bhee

Sehra, badal, derya sub he chaan lia
Mil jaoo - ab aap he humko manana bhee

Wu din bhee tu achay thay jub tum sung thay
Khushiyun kay auraq mein tha tub thikana bhee

Fara
**

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

very nice fara:)

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

Thanx a lot..

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

Nice ghaza Fara, thanx for sharing.

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

achi koshish hay :k:

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

Thanx Amal..

Azad Thanx, no humms this time.. u are getting there man...

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

aap bora na mana'in please ....... bohut ache lekhnay walay tareef kar rahay the ..... buss haan main haan mila dii.

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

mainay bura tu nahi manaya.. sirf itna kehri hun k aapki chup tu tuti khudda khudda ker kay…

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

hummm

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

^ ab yeh humm, chay mani darud?

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

koi nahi waise hi khayal aya.

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

aureet..:stuck_out_tongue:

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

??? :confused:

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

matlub

matlubkay theek hay boss…

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

buhat khoob…thanx 4 sharing** Fara** dear :flower1:

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

shukriya PK.. achi hay kia.. koi tu batayee.. azad saab bhee humm humm kertay rehtay hein.. koi bhee nuks ni nikalta, mujhay kaisay pata chalay ga k acha likhri hun kay nahi…:frowning:

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

*well achchi hay issi liyay taareef bhi kardi mohtarmaa'h *

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Okay, lertay kyun hoo..

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

jabb Azad sahab bola'ey jane lagein to Khan Sahab ne to larrna hi hay. :)

rehi baat acha hay se ziyada kuch kehnay ki, to aise main zuban o bayaan ke qyada, qanoon se waqfiyat lazm hay. jo ke hum nahi rakhte... iss kam'maygi ke alam main 'hummm' ki jasart ke sazawar hein.

adab.

Re: ~Ek Ghazal~

Main kahan larr raha hoon :bummer: