fara
December 11, 2005, 2:14pm
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**Meinay Tumko Perkha bhee aur jana bhee
Dhoop mein chalker sayee ko pehchana bhee
Meray laboon pay aaj tu koi geet nahi
Bhool gayein hun mein tu ab wu zamana bhee
Yadoon ki dehleez pay betthi Sochti hun
Ab tu rasta tanha hay, anjana bhee
Sehra, badal, derya sub he chaan lia
Mil jaoo - ab aap he humko manana bhee
Wu din bhee tu achay thay jub tum sung thay
Khushiyun kay auraq mein tha tub thikana bhee
Fara
**
Amal
December 11, 2005, 4:30pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
Nice ghaza Fara, thanx for sharing.
fara
December 12, 2005, 8:59am
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
Thanx Amal..
Azad Thanx, no humms this time.. u are getting there man...
Azad
December 12, 2005, 9:06am
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
aap bora na mana'in please ....... bohut ache lekhnay walay tareef kar rahay the ..... buss haan main haan mila dii.
fara
December 12, 2005, 12:59pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
mainay bura tu nahi manaya.. sirf itna kehri hun k aapki chup tu tuti khudda khudda ker kay…
fara
December 12, 2005, 1:08pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
^ ab yeh humm, chay mani darud?
Azad
December 12, 2005, 1:27pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
koi nahi waise hi khayal aya.
fara
December 12, 2005, 1:39pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
matlub
Azad:
???
matlubkay theek hay boss…
Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
buhat khoob…thanx 4 sharing** Fara** dear
fara
December 12, 2005, 2:19pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
shukriya PK.. achi hay kia.. koi tu batayee.. azad saab bhee humm humm kertay rehtay hein.. koi bhee nuks ni nikalta, mujhay kaisay pata chalay ga k acha likhri hun kay nahi…
Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
*well achchi hay issi liyay taareef bhi kardi mohtarmaa'h *
Azad
December 12, 2005, 2:58pm
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Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
jabb Azad sahab bola'ey jane lagein to Khan Sahab ne to larrna hi hay. :)
rehi baat acha hay se ziyada kuch kehnay ki, to aise main zuban o bayaan ke qyada, qanoon se waqfiyat lazm hay. jo ke hum nahi rakhte... iss kam'maygi ke alam main 'hummm' ki jasart ke sazawar hein.
adab.
Re: ~Ek Ghazal~
fara:
Okay, lertay kyun hoo..
Main kahan larr raha hoon