Dil bhee kitna pagal hay
Bay sochay, Bay Samghay…
Kahein Bhee… Kabhi Bhee
Kisi Shanasa Say Chehray Ko Dekh Ker
Humaknay Lagta Hay…
Lehjoon Ki Thandak
Ankhoon Main Tairti Barfaab Si Ajnabiyat
Jamid Khamoshi…
Sab Say Baykhabbar
Khushfehmi Ki Urran Bherta Hay
Aur Phir Sard Muhar Rawiyoon Main
Ulhajnay Lagta Hay…
Doobnay Lagta Hay…
Dil Bhee Kitna Pagal Hay!
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
very nice try :k:
koi bhi cheez baykaar nahi hotee its a nice piece
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
hmm... ok
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
aap k khayaalaat aap k apnay baray mein ghalat bhi ho saktay hean Allah g nay kisi ko bekar ya faltoo paida nahi kiya
well mujhay tou iss piece mein kuch bekar nahi laga
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
Nawazish Hay Bibi aap ki... Allah Khush Rakhay
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
bekar teh to ider kio post kee:cb:
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
fara bajeee esee bateyn nehe kerte allah naraz ho jata he
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
If you want, I can get the whole thread deleted? 
Baykar chizaain waisay bhee raddi ki tokri main achi lagti hain…nahi?
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
Nahe yeh nazam baykaar tou nahe, aik bohat umdah kosish hai,
keep it up :k:
and never belittle urself.
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
If you want, I can get the whole thread deleted? :) Baykar chizaain waisay bhee raddi ki tokri main achi lagti hain...nahi?
noway:ASA: meyn toh mazak kerte hon es ka yei metleb nehe sach meyn bekar teh, nice he asan urdu he me ko semg a gae he koch
ap ke pas ketne tokrian heyn ? :AID:
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
a different way of writing and very clear.
thanks for sharing the poem, fara.
best,
Dushwari
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
Mujhy laga “aik Bakary Si nazm”
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
:k:
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
Nice very nice try :k:
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
sach bola aap nain… waqaiee baikaar hai 
j/k
achay khayalaat hain
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
Its nice Fara
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
Ankhoon Main Tairti Barfaab Si Ajnabiyat
wah ,, kyaa khoob iste'aara hai
Fara ..bohut achchay
Re: Ek baykar si nazam...
Shukriya TLK bhai and JW, muncho and everyone else....
Re: Ek baykar si nazam…
very nice :k: