Ek baykar si nazam...

Aryaan · February 7, 2008, 2:07am

Re: Ek baykar si nazam…

Bohat hi achi koshish hai Fara..:k:

fara · February 11, 2008, 10:16am

Re: Ek baykar si nazam...

Shukriya Aryaan and Sha-e-Hijr!

babar444 · February 15, 2008, 4:28pm

Re: Ek baykar si nazam...

kia baat hay aap ki ,beautiful poetry

Amal · January 28, 2011, 6:55pm

Re: Ek baykar si nazam…

Bohat achi nazm hey fara ji :k: … alfaaz achey chunney heiN aap ney aur connectivity bhi maojood hey. On balance, it’s a good poem k: … keep it up.

fara · January 28, 2011, 7:24pm

Re: Ek baykar si nazam…

Thank you so much for reading this poem…

Shazia_Arif · January 29, 2011, 7:22am

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its not bekaar…mujhe to apka master piece laga…v nice.

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 29, 2011, 8:04am

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ab to tokriyan b ziada ho gae hongi fara sis

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 30, 2011, 5:59am

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Very Nice fara

sach kaha jo b kaha . . . ..

fara · January 30, 2011, 9:42pm

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Thanks so much Shazia and Heart Hacker…

MM tokriyaaN kum hu gayeeN hain

Koyal · February 7, 2011, 3:07am

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nice 1 fara :k: