Ek baykar si nazam...

Re: Ek baykar si nazam…

Bohat hi achi koshish hai Fara..:k:

Re: Ek baykar si nazam...

Shukriya Aryaan and Sha-e-Hijr!

Re: Ek baykar si nazam...

kia baat hay aap ki ,beautiful poetry

Re: Ek baykar si nazam…

Bohat achi nazm hey fara ji :k: … alfaaz achey chunney heiN aap ney aur connectivity bhi maojood hey. On balance, it’s a good poem :):k: … keep it up.

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Thank you so much for reading this poem...

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its not bekaar...mujhe to apka master piece laga...v nice.

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ab to tokriyan b ziada ho gae hongi fara sis :hehe:

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Very Nice fara :)

sach kaha jo b kaha . . . ..

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Thanks so much Shazia and Heart Hacker...

MM tokriyaaN kum hu gayeeN hain ;)

Re: Ek baykar si nazam…

nice 1 fara :k: