Eik zara pyaar ko

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:eek: :eek:

amma apni hai kaya?

agar apni hai to kamaal hai… bary chupay rustam ho bhai

wah wah sahib… one of the best i have read in sho’ara-e-gupshup

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wah hazrat wah ... Ghum mein doubi hovi barsat ... maza agaya :)

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Thanks CG and Aliyish

Yes it is mine :)

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very nice :k:

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jo kay khud chand sitaroon ka matlashi hai
tum usay pori kaninaat samjh bethay ho

bohat khoob :)

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TLK bhai buhat zabardast ghazal hay... werna kam he log achi ghazal keh patay hain...

Thanks for sharing!

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Thank you Bheegiyad, Shab and Fara ...

that is really kind of you folks ... :)

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jezbat
metlashee
asbat
mat
taswer
moshkel words:ASA:

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Jezbaat >>> Sentiments
Matlaashee >> Searcher
Asbaat >> Yes
Maat >> Defeat
Tasawwar >> Imagine

Muskhil words >>> Difficult words

:ASA: ayaa samajh maiN

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bohat piyaree gazal hai...................keep it up........likhtay rahain aur share kartay rahain..........thanks

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ek zara piyaar ko jezbaat samajh bethay ho

roshnee sayay ko din raat samajh bethay ho

hum to alfaz ko jumloon main pirotay rahay

tum esharoon main har ek baat samajh bethay ho

kaisee sada dilli kay ankh kay ek katray ko

ghum main dobe huee barsaat samajh bethay ho

dil jo haray ho, issay fatah tasawwar karna

piyaar jitay ho,issay maat samajh bethay ho

kitnay masoom ho,etebar-e-wafa kitna hai

meray inkar ko asbat samajh bethay ho

jo kay khud chaad sitaroon kay matlaashee hain

tum issay puree kayenaat samajh bethay ho

kya baat hai....beautiful........

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nehe aia:(

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Thanks Fiza .. appreciate you putting it in roman urdu ... thanks

M M ... you have to start from alif bay tay ... :D

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no doubt excellent work of poetry.please tell me how to post poetry in urdu font as u have done.please help me

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woww,,,it is awsome..

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Oh my God...this is beautiful indeed. Not just the flow but the choice of comparisons. This is deep, and pure. You are gifted, TLK.

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AQ ne koshes shoro he ke teh ke gs ne mug masom pe zulm ker dia:teary2:

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buhat he khob
zabardast

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thank you guys .. now I feel encouraged to post remaining two shairs that I did not add .. cause I thought who cares about such long ghazal