Eik zara pyaar ko

Aryaan · February 7, 2008, 2:01am

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Excellent **TLK **..:k:

chacha_Ghalib · February 7, 2008, 3:52pm

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go ahead and post them too ... and share more of your work. It doesn't look like this was your first ghazal.

TLK · February 7, 2008, 4:05pm

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Thanks again guys … here are the remaining two

Yes CG this was not the first one

chacha_Ghalib · February 7, 2008, 4:22pm

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^ pehla shair bohat acha hai :k:

doosra bhi theek hai… par mujhe ‘jin sabab’ main kuch kharaabi lagti hai

anyways… share more of your work. you seem like an accomplished poet

TLK · February 7, 2008, 6:56pm

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It should be Jis sabab or Jin asbaab .. you are right ... :)

I knew that .. felt too lazy to re-think the shair :D

fizatiq · February 7, 2008, 9:26pm

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keep sharing.........

K337 · February 10, 2008, 11:27am

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awesome

alaa