It’s been a long time (more than 6 months) that I shared anything here…
The kind of response I had received in past from my fellow members here were truely amazing…
I once said to **Amal **that "You Do not leave many for a few people…" I did not know that a simple sentence like this could have such great deep and striking meanings that my friend capricorn once quoted it for myself That was the time when I realized how much people care about others… without having known him, he took the initiative to support me here…
I also miss my old buddies of Gupshup including ATA, SalmanNY, Lajawab, dewana tera and so many others…
The friends and audience (reader for that matter) I have come across here are truely fantastic and particularly the reason for me to find a way of my return.. It is a fact that if did not have such friends like you on this board, I might have been vanished and forgotten… It is you who kept my thoughts alive here… When I saw my last year’s thread on December brought up by ghazal kisi ki, I was truely touched… then Innocent_Smile’s thread dedicated to me based on my same poem in Intikhab and the kind of responses I read, it was inevitable for me to be among you people again…
I feel honoured to share my this poem with you today… I also feel honoured everytime I click on sho’ra-e-gupshup to realize that it was given this name on my suggestion… There are so many things that make you proud if done correctly:
Nai ruto~on ki chaNdni maiN guzartay lamhoN ki ashuftagi maiN wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye zindagi ki sa’atoN maiN ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye woh insaan kitnay be-rehem niklay rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye badaltay rishtoN kay aNgun maiN
**chura kay daaman ** bacha kar nazraiN jhaTak kar hathoN ko wo naye rishtoN ko amar kar gaye
jo ajnabi rastoN par ajnabi lamhoN ki Aaghosh maiN ajnabi fiza maiN ajnabi ashnaaoN maiN hum ko ajnabiat kay supurd kar gaye
**dil cheernay walay ** raqabatoN ki aag maiN wohi log dua kar gaye rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
It’s nice to see you back… I must say… I don’t know how you are as a person as I have never known you that well… but your poems sure did leave an impression on me…
Once again… it’s great to have you back… and once again… you wrote a masterpiece
Wonderful selection of words.. expressed in a beautiful way…
ur words r truly amazing :k: the way u express ur feelings r damn cool keep writing my friend , belive me u r one of the most precious guy for this GS land .
"You Do not leave many for a few people…” that was one of the best things you said (to Amal bahii) and once to me in your lecture … halo .. And trust me whenever i get hurt by one person, your this one sentence makes me think again about leaving everything behind.. this sentence is so simple but it has so many meanings .. There are always more love and truth.. .. so true .. hugz ..
“It is a fact that if did not have such friends like you on this board, I might have been vanished and forgotten .. It is you who kept my thoughts alive here…” humm vanished and forgotten .. * legends never die they are only .. * now you complete wink ..
and now about the poem .. I think you know how much I loved it when I read it first time but here is the formality.. :-p .. I absolutely love love love love this poem .. first time when I read I was like wowwwwww … after December and the ghazal you had in your sig i think this one is THE BEST nazam you wrote so far .. .. the way you put the whole thing is simply great .. MashAllah .. wasie to pore k pore bohut khoobsorat hai per i I’m in love with this line >> wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye .. keep posting and keep writing .. :-p ..
Wondefully written Anwar Bhai :k: Aap bohat sad likhte hain lekin acha likhte hain I like that line “rifaqaatein jo neelam ker gaaye” - it really gets to you