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[Sohaib]

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nicely done!

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

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Anwaar Bhai… You were never Forgoten

Mashalah Nice Poem… and… Now as U r back tou Inshallah Will see more and more of Ur work

[AQ]

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Thanks everyone:)

I will insha ALLAH respond to everyone individully, provided the life is alive :)

Thanks again.

[Rameesha]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

• Nai ruto~on ki chaNdni maiN
  guzartay lamhoN ki ashuftagi maiN
  wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye
  zindagi ki sa’atoN maiN
  ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
  woh insaan kitnay be-rehem niklay
  rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
  badaltay rishtoN kay aNgun maiN
  **chura kay daaman **
  bacha kar nazraiN
  jhaTak kar hathoN ko
  wo naye rishtoN ko amar kar gaye

jo ajnabi rastoN par
ajnabi lamhoN ki Aaghosh maiN
ajnabi fiza maiN
ajnabi ashnaaoN maiN
hum ko ajnabiat kay supurd kar gaye

**–Anwaar Qureshi **(Dec. 09 2004)

buhat khobsoorat nazm he

[Lamhay]

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Welcome Back AQ ! wonderful poetry...

P:S :- Shabbo GS or shairi na chorhna !

[AQ]

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@Lamhay

P:S :- Shabbo GS or shairi na chorhna !

I probably :insha: won’t

but keeping them both in one place might not be possible

[DiYa]

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nice :k:

[ASA]

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mashAllah… kya kehny… :k:

[Capricorn]

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Beautiful :k:

[HAMMAD]

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nice brother

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

**Nai ruto~on ki chaNdni maiN
guzartay lamhoN ki ashuftagi maiN
wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye
zindagi ki sa’atoN maiN
ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
woh insaan kitnay be-rehem niklay
**rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
badaltay rishtoN kay aNgun maiN
chura kay daaman
bacha kar nazraiN
jhaTak kar hathoN ko
wo naye rishtoN ko amar kar gaye

:'((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

[Capricorn]

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It was on the second reading that I read youe reference to my nick. Pehle sirf tumharee poem parhee thee. Masrrofiat bhee buhat buree balla hotee hai
We have spent years here and the comapnionship is more like real life friends…to kia hua agar aik doosre ko naheen jaante? Insaan, meree nazar mein apne khayalon se jaana jaata hai jo ke hum yahan share kar lete hain..bas yahee rishta hai aur kisee lihaaz se kam bhee naheen hai…
You know what Anwaar…I ve hated controversies like anything aur badle mein mujhe inhee se hee paala para hai zindagee bhar Jitna jis cheez se bhaago usee ke ird gird paye jaate hain hum…sad but true.
Yahan bhee ajeeb tamashe hote rahe..kabhee tum kisee ko rokte rahe aur kabhee tumhein koi rokta raha…aur aik waqt yeh bhee aaya ke koi kisee ko rok naheen raha tha
Khalish mere dil mein bhee hai magar kis se kahoon? Yahee behtar samjha ke chup rahoon aur chup hee raha hoon. Haalaat-e-gupshup kaise bante bigarte rahe yeh khabar rakhna bee chor diya…suddenly saw you and Amal posting. I remember I welcomed Amal in his thread magar sahab ne lift hee naheen karaee..
Kaun kahta hai ke bhoolne se bhooltee hain talkhiyaan…bas dil mein dabaye phirte hain ahl-e-dil. This is the reason I am not interested anymore to participate in GS these days.
Anyways I am glad that you people are back. Bhoola bhatka mein bhee aa jaya hee karta hoon. Have a nice time.

[AQ]

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@Capricorn

We have spent years here and the comapnionship is more like real life friends…to kia hua agar aik doosre ko naheen jaante? Insaan, meree nazar mein apne khayalon se jaana jaata hai jo ke hum yahan share kar lete hain..bas yahee rishta hai aur kisee lihaaz se kam bhee naheen hai…
You know what Anwaar…I ve hated controversies like anything aur badle mein mujhe inhee se hee paala para hai zindagee bhar Jitna jis cheez se bhaago usee ke ird gird paye jaate hain hum…sad but true.
Yahan bhee ajeeb tamashe hote rahe..kabhee tum kisee ko rokte rahe aur kabhee tumhein koi rokta raha…aur aik waqt yeh bhee aaya ke koi kisee ko rok naheen raha tha

Kaun kahta hai ke bhoolne se bhooltee hain talkhiyaan…bas dil mein dabaye phirte hain ahl-e-dil. This is the reason I am not interested anymore to participate in GS these days.

Couldn’t agree more on that:)…

I am walking behind you I guess… yeah I know I am very slow

[AQ]

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Oh and Capri.. I am adding you in my Journal Buddy List for any future poem of mine, that is if I have any in future:)... I am not going to share them here on public board no more :) If you know what I mean. :-)

[Dada_Abbaa]

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[system]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

Nai ruto~on ki chaNdni maiN
guzartay lamhoN ki ashuftagi maiN
wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye
zindagi ki sa’atoN maiN
ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
woh insaan kitnay be-rehem niklay
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
badaltay rishtoN kay aNgun maiN
**chura kay daaman **
bacha kar nazraiN
jhaTak kar hathoN ko
wo naye rishtoN ko amar kar gaye

jo ajnabi rastoN par
ajnabi lamhoN ki Aaghosh maiN
ajnabi fiza maiN
ajnabi ashnaaoN maiN
hum ko ajnabiat kay supurd kar gaye

**dil cheernay walay **
raqabatoN ki aag maiN
wohi log dua kar gaye
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye

beautiful

[AQ]

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Thanks Vived and ATA :)