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[muqawwee123]

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@JawX

sahi misra yeh hai…
rah-e-dour-e-ishq mai rota hai kia
agay agay dekhiye hota hai kia…
sab sy ziada mustanid quliyat-e-meer hain, 1811 mai, Fort William College Calcuta ny shaya ki thi… us mai yehe misra likha hua hai… pta nai yeh misra kis trha mashoor ho gya..

yeh misra ghalat mashoor hua wa hai
*“ibtada-e-ishq hai rota hai kia”
“agay agay dekhiye hota hai kia”
*
india mai ek idara hai, jo urdu language k liye kam ker rha hai “QOUMI COUNCILE BRAYE FAROGHE-URDU ZUBAN” … is idaray ny dubara “quliyat-e-meer” ka TASHEH SHUDA edition shaya hua hai, jisko Zil-e-Abbas Abassi ny muratab kia hai, Shahm-ur-Rehman farooqi sahab ki zair-e-nigrani, tasheeh shuda edition mai jo misra maine btaya hai wo shamil hai…

Khush amded JawX. Boht achi aur informative post hai aapki.. Keep visiting and sharing :k:

Yeh zaroor bataiye ga ke aap kis cheez ko search karte hue iss thread tak pohunchay?

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Parveen Shakir said:

Wo kahin bhi gaya lota tau mere paas aya Bus yehi ik baat **hai **** achi mere harjai ki**

Do you agree to forgive such harjai each and every time? Will you forgive someone for disloyalty? Is there any limit to Bardasht & Sacrifice in love?

Yes...but only if he/she is really worthy of it.

[muqawwee123]

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Per jis se muhabbat ki jae uss se ziada worth kis ki hos sakti hai.

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The type of bewafaye wud decrease the worth :D

[muqawwee123]

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^ ethay rakh

so bar bar aane jane wala is not acceptable?

[NS2]

Harjai ek bar chla jae to mehboob dua mangta hai k wo wapas ajae..chahe ek bar jae ya bar bar..mehboob ko har bar uske lotne ki aas rahegi..sirf wohi mehboob jsko dil-o-jan se apne harjai se muhabbat hai or uski zindagi ka maqsad he uske harjai ki mojoodgi hai..i believe agr apka pyar sacha ho to us harjai ko kbi to apka khyal ayega wo bar bar jb wapas araha hai wo isilye he qk apke pyar ne use bulaya hai..akhir kar wo ruk he jaega apke pas..speaking from experience;)

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@muqawwee123

^ ethay rakh

so bar bar aane jane wala is not acceptable?

Not at all… apni bhi self respect hai…agar itna he kamzoor qism ka insan hai tou wudnt accept him either ways…zindagi bhar ki museebat thori mol leyni hai:snooty:

[muqawwee123]

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@sahr

Harjai ek bar chla jae to mehboob dua mangta hai k wo wapas ajae..chahe ek bar jae ya bar bar..mehboob ko har bar uske lotne ki aas rahegi..sirf wohi mehboob jsko dil-o-jan se apne harjai se muhabbat hai or uski zindagi ka maqsad he uske harjai ki mojoodgi hai..i believe agr apka pyar sacha ho to us harjai ko kbi to apka khyal ayega wo bar bar jb wapas araha hai wo isilye he qk apke pyar ne use bulaya hai..akhir kar wo ruk he jaega apke pas..speaking from experience;)

Thanwi sahb ki ‘Behishti Zewar’ ki yaad taza kardi

[NS2]

@muqawwee123

@sahr

Harjai ek bar chla jae to mehboob dua mangta hai k wo wapas ajae..chahe ek bar jae ya bar bar..mehboob ko har bar uske lotne ki aas rahegi..sirf wohi mehboob jsko dil-o-jan se apne harjai se muhabbat hai or uski zindagi ka maqsad he uske harjai ki mojoodgi hai..i believe agr apka pyar sacha ho to us harjai ko kbi to apka khyal ayega wo bar bar jb wapas araha hai wo isilye he qk apke pyar ne use bulaya hai..akhir kar wo ruk he jaega apke pas..speaking from experience;)

Thanwi sahb ki ‘Behishti Zewar’ ki yaad taza kardi

Acha behishti zewar mai kahan hai aesa:)? Did I sound too molani?

[muqawwee123]

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Nahi you didn’t sound Molana. magar Behashti Zevar wale molana sahib bhi naik biviyon ko ye hidayat karte hain ke miyan ke samne uff na kare chahe wo kitna bewafa hojae, chahe wo doosri aurat ghar le aae. Bivi ko chahiye ke uss doosri ke liye bhi lazeez ta’aam banae takay miyan ka dil us par mutawajah ho.

Behashti Zewar urf khudkushi karne ke 101 tareeqe

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Haha u r right..how can u forget ‘apne maa baap k ghar b week main ek dafa jae’ ‘rishtedaron ki shadion mai na jae’ and many more tareeqas to live a life like a bandhi but then again the quote ‘bandhi banke rahogi to wo khud bkhud ghulam banke rahega’
Jokes apart its a very nice book regarding masails but i dont know mere prespective mai itni sakhti regarding women in the past led to rebelious women in the present:(

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@sahr

Harjai ek bar chla jae to mehboob dua mangta hai k wo wapas ajae..chahe ek bar jae ya bar bar..mehboob ko har bar uske lotne ki aas rahegi..sirf wohi mehboob jsko dil-o-jan se apne harjai se muhabbat hai or uski zindagi ka maqsad he uske harjai ki mojoodgi hai..i believe agr apka pyar sacha ho to us harjai ko kbi to apka khyal ayega wo bar bar jb wapas araha hai wo isilye he qk apke pyar ne use bulaya hai..akhir kar wo ruk he jaega apke pas..speaking from experience;)

Zindagi ka maqsad harjaye ki maujoodgi:hayaa: woh bhi bewafa harjaye…
U know y he keeps coming bk?cuz jub baaqi larkiyan thukra dain…tou thts the only option left

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@Little Princess

@sahr

Harjai ek bar chla jae to mehboob dua mangta hai k wo wapas ajae..chahe ek bar jae ya bar bar..mehboob ko har bar uske lotne ki aas rahegi..sirf wohi mehboob jsko dil-o-jan se apne harjai se muhabbat hai or uski zindagi ka maqsad he uske harjai ki mojoodgi hai..i believe agr apka pyar sacha ho to us harjai ko kbi to apka khyal ayega wo bar bar jb wapas araha hai wo isilye he qk apke pyar ne use bulaya hai..akhir kar wo ruk he jaega apke pas..speaking from experience;)

Zindagi ka maqsad harjaye ki maujoodgi:hayaa: woh bhi bewafa harjaye…
U know y he keeps coming bk?cuz jub baaqi larkiyan thukra dain…tou thts the only option left

Haha i dont know about others but im marriad to that harjai now:p and his reason for leaving were his parents not girls..who finally came around cause they knew they couldnt get me out of his heart:wink:

[muqawwee123]

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^ lucky you :)

[NS2]

Plus i was talking as a lover not as me..i was getting into the feel like a shayer im not that romantic k harjai zindagi ka maqsad banjae but shayer k nazarye mai ye he matlab hoga shair ka

[muqawwee123]

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Iss shair ki khaliq Parveen Shakir thi, and as per some articles, I recently read about her life, she was a very strong woman, who lived her life on her own terms.

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then what do u think y she wrote this shair? I havent read the whole nazam/ghazal so cant really judge..u would know better:)

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@sahr

Haha i dont know about others but im marriad to that harjai now:p and his reason for leaving were his parents not girls..who finally came around cause they knew they couldnt get me out of his heart:wink:

awww…sweeettt
This is where “type of bewafaye” comes in

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Btw its fun talking to u..your threads r always interesting..

[muqawwee123]

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@sahr

then what do u think y she wrote this shair? I havent read the whole nazam/ghazal so cant really judge..u would know better:)

A writer’s writings are based on two things. Experience and Observation. Parveen Shakir was very much aware of society’s problem, so that might be based on her observation.