Dil Toot Gaya Dheeray Dheeray..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity September 28, 2007, 7:04am 1

Aik Achi Si Ghazal,

Her Sham’ma Bujhi Rafta Rafta Her Khuaab Luta Dheeray Dheeray
Sheesha Na Sahi Patthar Bhi Na Tha Dil Toot Gaya Dheeray Dheeray

Barso’n Main Maraasim Bantay Hain Lamhon Main Bhala Kya Tootain Ge
Tu Mujh Se Bichharna Chahay To Deevaar Uthaa Dheeray Dheeray

Ehsas Hua Barbaadi Ka Jab Saaray Ghar Main Dhool Uri
Aa’ee Hai Hamaray Aangan Main Pat’jhar Ki Hava Dheeray Dheeray

Dil Kaisay Jala Kis Vaqt Jala Hum Ko Bhi Pata Aakhir Main Chala
Phaila Hai Dhuaan Chup Ke Chup Ke Sulgi Hai Chita Dheeray Dheeray

Vo Haath Paraye Ho Bhi Gaye Ab Duur Ka Rishta Hai ‘Qaiser’
Aati Hai Meri Tanhai Main Khushbu-E-Hina Dheeray Dheeray

(Qaiser Jafri)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

SJ September 28, 2007, 8:47am 2

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Bohat Umdaa Ghazal hai Ahmer................:)
Barso'n Main Maraasim Bantay Hain Lamhon Main Bhala Kya Tootain Ge
Tu Mujh Se Bichharna Chahay To Deevaar Uthaa Dheeray Dheeray

Dil Kaisay Jala Kis Vaqt Jala Hum Ko Bhi Pata Aakhir Main Chala
Phaila Hai Dhuaan Chup Ke Chup Ke Sulgi Hai Chita Dheeray Dheeray

Saree ghazal he zabardust hai............magar ye ashaar mujhay zayada touchy lagay:)

redidentity September 28, 2007, 9:30am 3

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thnx alot dear for appreciation.. pata i feel so happy jab bhi aap hosla afzai kertay ho..

Minerva September 28, 2007, 9:30am 4

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bohat khubsoorat ghazal hai Red. beautiful!

redidentity September 28, 2007, 9:35am 5

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Thnk You Minerva :)

tum_bin_1 September 28, 2007, 9:40am 6

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Great Choice :k:

redidentity September 28, 2007, 9:45am 7

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thnx alot tum_bin :)

bheegiyaad September 28, 2007, 10:25am 8

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Barso'n Main Maraasim Bantay Hain Lamhon Main Bhala Kya Tootain Ge
Tu Mujh Se Bichharna Chahay To Deevaar Uthaa Dheeray Dheeray

Dil Kaisay Jala Kis Vaqt Jala Hum Ko Bhi Pata Aakhir Main Chala
Phaila Hai Dhuaan Chup Ke Chup Ke Sulgi Hai Chita Dheeray Dheeray

Vo Haath Paraye Ho Bhi Gaye Ab Duur Ka Rishta Hai 'Qaiser'
Aati Hai Meri Tanhai Main Khushbu-E-Hina Dheeray Dheeray

awesome :)

Jhanjharewali September 28, 2007, 10:52pm 9

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Zabardast Ahmer :)

Koyal September 29, 2007, 1:20am 10

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nice one :)

redidentity September 29, 2007, 4:40am 11

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Thnx bheegiyaad, JJW n Koyal :)

Kasouti/20 questions (archive)

majzoob September 29, 2007, 9:52am 12

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nice one

redidentity September 29, 2007, 10:16am 13

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Thnx majzoob :)

sunny_nicky September 29, 2007, 12:33pm 14

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guuddd g

Shab-e-Hijar September 29, 2007, 1:04pm 15

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wah bohat khoob :k:

Prince_Ali September 29, 2007, 4:48pm 16

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wah! good one bhai :k:

Last Day Of The Year!

Sheal September 29, 2007, 5:00pm 17

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bohot khoobsoorat ghazal hai :k: thanks for sharing ahmer. main akser yay shair gungunati hoon

redidentity October 1, 2007, 4:39am 18

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Thnx alot sunny, shab n prince :)

redidentity October 1, 2007, 4:40am 19

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thnx Sheal.. btw kis ke gungunatay ho aap

Sajalina October 1, 2007, 5:06am 20

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Very nice ghazal.