Dil Ki KaiNaat

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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kitni mushkil se kati kal ki meri raat na pooch
dil se nikli hoee honton me dabee baat na pooch

mein jis ke waastay lar jaaon is khudae se
mujhay khud se hai pyaari yeh kis ki zaat na pooch

wo kis ada se mere saamnay se guzraa abhi
kis tarhan meinay sambhaly mere jazbaat na pooch

waqat jo badlay to insaan badal jaatay hain
kya nahi dikhlaatay yeh gardish-e-halaat na pooch

wo kisi ka ho bhi gaya or mujhay khabar na hoe
kis tarhan usnay churaya hai mujh se haath na pooch

Is tarhan pal mein mujhay begana kar diya usnay
Kis tarhan apno se khaee hai me nay maat na pooch

ab tera pyaar nahi hai to sanam kuch bhi nahi
kitni mushkil se bani thi dil ki kainaat na pooch

LoN3Ly !!! siD !!!

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Re: Dil Ki KaiNaat

kia zamana agaya hai
ab tareef bhi danday k zor pe karwaogay sid
:smilestar: main to dar gaya

mein jis ke waastay lar jaaon is khudae se
mujhay khud se hai pyaari yeh kis ki zaat na pooch

wese realy buhat zabardast hai q k mujhay buhat kam ghazals pasand ati hain
dekhlo na nice bola hai na angotha dikhaya hai:D

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Tareef Meri Nahi Baba Sayeen Tareef Is Ghazal Ki Kion K Yeh Desrve Karti Hai !Aur Danday K Zor Par Nahi Hai Aik He Jaisay Replies Parh Parh K Bore Ho Gaya hOn MeiN :p

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**Ab agar kisi ko pasand na ay tu ap ka BP high ho jay ga MUshi ka asar ho giya :snooty: **

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apny dil se pochiiye aur jisko pasand na aaye us ki pasand par mein afsoos he kar sakta hon !Bp high vigh nahi hota mera :p

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:barbie: Jahan afsoos hota hy dil ka masla hota hy, dil ka masla hota hy tu BP bhi hota hy:snooty:

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Koi nAhI yeh Nai theory kahan Se aaa gAYi dil k masloon k liye buri khabrein hoti hain jo dil ka masla karti hain aur bp barhta hai :p

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nice sid but aaj kal tumheri poetry ke tune kuch badli badli see hai kya baat hai?

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bahot khuub hae SiD!

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waise tau reply kert main darr lag raha hai,

lekin ye itni achhi ghazal kis shayar ki hai..?

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aik jaisay replies kia matlab
ab kia reply me app ko luv ltter likhain

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hmmmm dead soul yeh hota hai na reply jis ki mein baat kar raha tha ;)

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How hard it was to pass the last night, don’t ask
Things of my heart that I couldn’t tell, don’t ask

For whom I would fight against the world
Who do I love more than myself, don’t ask

The way he walked by me a moment ago
How did I not let go my feelings, don’t ask

Man changes when things change around him
What do the bad times not bring, don’t ask

Some other woman now owns him, I didn’t know
How did he break up with me, don’t ask

In a moment he turned me into a stranger
How did he let me down, don’t ask

Now I’ve nothing if I don’t have my lover
How hard it was to find his love, don’t ask

Note: The last line needs revision. What is kainaat? Also posted at http://whitewings.sulekha.com/blog/post/2007/06/now-i-ve-nothing-if-i-don-t-have-my-lover.htm

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????
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kainaat means whole world or whole universe !

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Thanks. How would you say 'dil ki kainaat ban jaana (ban na)' in English? Does the current translation/transcreation truly reflect your ghazal? What changes would you suggest for revisions?

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veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Have you ever fallen in a public place ?
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wonderful sharing :)

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long time no see man :)

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Har waqt laraii k mood mein he rehti ho kiddo :smilestar:

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aray main tu compliment dey rahi thi:hoonh: