Did this today.. what do u think?

http://photos-b.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v1095/186/104/718065525/n718065525_5030169_5426.jpg

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Creative

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nice work aisha, keep it up

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nice work ayesha.
but i suggest you take away “Dude of Suspense”.

and if you dont wana replace it…then put “the” with the Pakistan Dude of Suspense (have lill lower font size, no Italic)

ps. and you really dont have to put your real names in there, larki :smack:

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Kya baat hai...very Nice Aisha

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Good job Aisha !

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hmmm,nice work!

thanx

thanx

lol thanx but actually this was the final project of one of my class lol

thanx asky

thanx shayen baji !

thanx!! :smiley:

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*To be honest it is nothing special.

1) background with HP letters is no good.

2) Overall the color palette is very dull.

3) the plug-in you have applied for the edge/bevel effect is not that appealing.

4) the font you are using is too fancy.

5) You did not explain what this is? A cover ? for what? Where is the TITLE?

6) the ratio of dimensions is not suitable for a cover.

But still a good attempt, but you need to be more creative and spend some time with your graphich app.
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actually if you would be around then you would know that this is a poster for the movie i made..

i dont care about all those, i am not a professional. i do things because i like doing them and if the end result appeals to my eye then i dont care about anything else.

^ Ayesha, u asked what people thought abt it :) and Samad gave his view...

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lol that's the sad truth :p

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nice suggestions samad.

ayesha go and do what ustad jee have suggested…zayda taan-taan mut keroo or phir say edit ker k post kero :smilestar:

ps. if u really wana learn it…do it as he suggested. and see the result. : )

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zobi the psd file is in uni :( ab kya karo? :(

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start everything from scratch. just use the raw images. and play around with the typography.

try to stick with sanserif fonts (as you are already rightnow), but explore other simpler looking fonts as well. extend your palette with max of three colors (and move on to more, if needed). and in any case avoid italic.

Be simple!..and u will be done in no time :hugz:

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lol thank you but i think i will do this tomorrow as it is already 1 30 am :p am tired!

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Aisha, is it too late? :bummer:

You’ve used too many fonts on one page. That’s visually not very appealing.
Also the font used in the names is too narrow to be beveled and shadowed.
You need one more color. Maybe something dramatic like red.
Use a clean sans serif font type.

Only grey images are nice.:chai:

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before I go on with saying oohh nice/creative/lovely etc etc ..
xplain what is this?

its a poster of the movie she made.
here you can see the trailer.