Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga
ishq ka jis shakhs ko bhi aarza ho jaey ga

be’basi ke jangaloN meiN torr dooN ga dam kaheiN
tu agar is morr par mujh se juda ho jaey ga

manziloN ko khojney ke gar iraadey tthos heiN
dal’daloN ke beech sey hi raasta ho jaey ga

poojney ka jurm to hum sey huwa hey dosto
kya khabar thi ishq meiN wo dewata ho jaey ga

walwala to theek hey par rehbaroN ke bin suno
raastoN meiN gum kaheiN ye qaafila ho jaey ga

sochta hoon mey’qashi ka aek aashiq kya mehaz
masjidoN meiN beitthney sey paarsa ho jaaey ga!

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http://i53.tinypic.com/2pqp1y9.gif

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

wow its amazing. i just loved it. :lajawab: pori ghazal hi achi hai lekin jo do sher mujy had se ziada pasand aaye un ka color main ne change kar dia. :slight_smile:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Wakae, ghazal kaabil-e-tareef hai Amal … :k:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

wah amal bohat khoob :k:

PS
:stuck_out_tongue:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

khoobsurati jub lafz bun jaaey tab aisay he chalakti hai

bht khoob :k:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Amal bhai what a lovely Ghazal it is :slight_smile: :k:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

bohat alaa...kya saboot dia parsai ka or end pe b barre siggi mare hain...well written :)

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Is this written by you :eek: A very nice ghazal Amal you are really a poet :k:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

hmmmm aram say doobara paRhooN gi.....

:-p

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

ab meri copy say naqal maari hai kahooN gi to kya aap yaqeen kar laiN gi :cb:

kaash ham bhi Poet hotay :-p

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**aap POET kabhii bhii nahiiN ho saktiiN...laakh jhak maar len magar yeh kaam naa mumkin hai...saarii eRii choTii kaa zor bhii lagaa DaaleN to bhii nahiiN ban saktiiN POET...yeh meraa da'va hai...haN:

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agar POETESS bannaa hai to jab chaaheN ban jaayeN...vo to aapke baayeN haath kaa kaam hai :D**

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

:-p

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

u ne meri copy ki thi :crying:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Bohat aala Amal **... **kia khabar thi ishq main wo dewata hojaiga jaiga , zabardast!

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

ap donoN ko larhnay say fursat mil jati jo likh bhi laitay ? :-p

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

chal meri chanda bas credit lene se peeche na raheen :smilestar:

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:crying:

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Nice one

poojney ka jurm to hum sey huwa hey dosto
kya khabar thi ishq meiN wo dewata ho jaey ga

Mujhay aik she'r yaad aa raha hay kah

Sar jhukao gay tu pathar daivta ho jay ga
itna mut chaho ussay wo baywafa ho jay ga

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Bashir Badar :) ... is zameen pe aap ko aur bhi bohat si fasleiN leh'lahaati hui nazar aaeiN gi :)

Chalye isi bahaaney aap ney merey thread ko ronaq to bakhshi :)

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

another beauty :slight_smile: :k: