Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

boha zabardast :k:

bohat AALA :lajawab:

kia rabt hy kia lafon ki tarteeb hi :mash2:

aik say barh kar aik sha’ar

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

mi abi tak 5 dafa parh chuki hun ,yaqeen karayn hardafa ha apna hi maza hi

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

Likhnay walay he jaan saktay haiN
Lafz likhnay maiN jo qayyamat haiN

Its one of your most well wriiten ghazal, keep it up..

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Re: Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga

:k: