DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal December 4, 2005, 1:25am 1

Deikho to ye umeedoN ka diya jalta hey kahaaN tak
aaNkhoN meiN ye ik khaab naya palta hey kahaN tak

na’jaaney kis gumaan ke behlaawey meiN uljah kar
wo saath to chala aaya hey par chalta hey kahaaN tak

hey naaz bohat zabt pe magar deikhna hey mujh ko
ye haalaat meiN jalta hey to pighalta hey kahaaN tak

log taaq meiN beitthey heiN ke deikho to is ka kirdaar
majbooriyoN ke saaNchey meiN dhalta hey kahaaN tak

merey tajas’sus-bharey gumaaN ko ab ye fikr lagi hey
ke rangoN meiN waqt apney tujhey rangta hey kahaaN tak

imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

By: Amal

fghd December 4, 2005, 6:46am 2

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

nice :)

*imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak
*

koiDost December 4, 2005, 8:31am 3

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Bahut Khoob *Amal *!

Golden_Scorpion_1 December 5, 2005, 7:16am 4

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Beautiful… Very Nice** Amal**

Precious_Khan December 5, 2005, 7:43am 5

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

lovely…buhat achchay

Amal December 6, 2005, 12:18pm 6

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Thanx for liking it guys :)

Precious_Khan December 6, 2005, 1:24pm 7

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

u r wellcome shelcome ji

ghazal_kisi_ke December 7, 2005, 3:43am 8

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

bohut khoob as always

you seem to be really busy. atay jatay raha karein. =)

musicmaniac December 7, 2005, 4:00am 9

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Phenomenal

AQ December 7, 2005, 6:25am 10

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Amal:

It's always great to read you here.

Do post more often.

Azad December 8, 2005, 2:18pm 11

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Maza Agia

IS December 9, 2005, 1:44pm 12

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

**Bohat khoooob **
Beautiful

Wish you all a Happy Ugadi/Gudipadava

Amal December 10, 2005, 2:50pm 13

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Yes. Desperately trying to reqularly steal some time from life

Guys thanx a lot for liking the ghazal

Koyal December 10, 2005, 11:30pm 14

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Beautiful like always..wesay hum b yehi kuch dekh rahya mean wait and watch main :)

fara December 11, 2005, 2:21pm 15

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Everyone has summed up what i wanted to say - but you have the potential to write, i would appreciate if u post more often..

Amal December 11, 2005, 4:18pm 16

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Koyal aap kahaaN deikhti heiN, aap to pataa nahi kahaaN, kahaaN urrti phirti heiN

Fara thanx for your comments :~)

Koyal December 12, 2005, 12:56am 17

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

dekhnay wali nazar hona chaiey Amal..aur nazar aur time kahin aur laga ho tu KOI paas rah k b nazar nahi ata:(
wesay koyal k urnay ki baat choraiN koyal ne jahan se basera shoro kia tha wohi pe hai..lagta hia ap ki ankhon main andhera:D …jo koyal dekhaiey nahi parti

Amal December 12, 2005, 11:25am 18

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Time, time ki baat hey. Isn’t it?

Koyal December 13, 2005, 4:16am 19

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

han na time kharab hotey dairi nahi lagti “isn’t” acha hota jo time wohi ruk jata

ASA December 13, 2005, 4:45am 20

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

wah bouhat achay… very nice.. :k:

Amal bhai.. kafi arsay baad nazar aaye.. khayreyat thee??