DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

[Pakeeza]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Beautiful Poem Amal, Shukar hay kuch aap nay bhi likhaa:-) by the way phir wuh kahan tak badlaa :-)

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Koyal

han na time kharab hotey dairi nahi lagti “isn’t” acha hota jo time wohi ruk jata

Lagta hey aap ney suna nahi ke “waqt rukta nahi hey kisi ke leeye” :~)

AsSweetAs, thanx for liking the ghazal. Bas kuch masroofiat ki waja sey…

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Pakeeza

…by the way phir wuh kahan tak badlaa

hmmm…kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta abhi. “deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak” :~)

[Guest7777]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

[QUOTE]
imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

[/QUOTE]

As always mairee entry late hi hui hai ...per your work is beautiful as ever if not better :)

[Pakeeza]

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@Amal

hmmm…kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta abhi. “deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak” :~)

kya aap ko waqei hi poora yaqeen hay keh wuh badal bhii saktaa hay :~O

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Pakeeza

kya aap ko waqei hi poora yaqeen hay keh wuh badal bhii saktaa hay :~O

**
merey tajas’sus-bharey gumaaN ko ab ye fikr lagi hey
ke rangoN meiN waqt apney tujhey rangta hey kahaaN ta :~)
**

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Guest7777

As always mairee entry late hi hui hai …per your work is beautiful as ever if not better

Nice to see you again in my thread. And thanx for your comments

[Koyal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Amal

Lagta hey aap ney suna nahi ke “waqt rukta nahi hey kisi ke leeye” :~)

suna tha isi leay paish-e-khemat hia

***Tum jo chaaho to kisi roz yuNhi chaltey chaltey ***
***phir usi raah pe do chaar qadam waapis aana ***
***wo raah jo ley ke tumheiN door chali aai hey ***
***usi raah pe zaraa deikhna ke ab bhi shaaed ***
***kaheiN door muntazir ho pas-e-gubaar koi ***
***tumharey paas na agarcha ho shumaar koi ***
***hawaa ka qaafla aawaara koi bataaey tumheiN ***
***kisi ki sulagti hui aas ka dia dikhaey tumhey ***
***guzrey lamhaat ki guzargaah sey guzartey huwey ***
***kitaab-e-yaad ke aaoraaq ko ulat’tey huwey ***
***jaaney kya socho tum jaaney kya guzrey tum par ***
***uljah ke reh jao kisi pal sey ya wapis chal do ***
***gira do aaNkhoN sey aaNsu ya shaed haNs do ***
***phir bhi mumkin ho to kisi roz yuNhi chaltey chaltey ***
***usi raah pe do chaar qadam waapis aana…! ***

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[Pakeeza]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Amal

**
merey tajas’sus-bharey gumaaN ko ab ye fikr lagi hey
ke rangoN meiN waqt apney tujhey rangta hey kahaaN ta :~)
**

Yeh tou waqt hi bataaey ga… Wait and watch:~)

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Koyal

suna tha isi leay paish-e-khemat hia

***guzrey lamhaat ki guzargaah sey guzartey huwey *** ***kitaab-e-yaad ke aaoraaq ko ulat'tey huwey *** ***jaaney kya socho tum jaaney kya guzrey tum par *** ***uljah ke reh jao kisi pal sey ya wapis chal do *** ***gira do aaNkhoN sey aaNsu ya shaed haNs do *** ***phir bhi mumkin ho to kisi roz yuNhi chaltey chaltey *** ***usi raah pe do chaar qadam waapis aana...!:( :blush: *** ******

To aa to gaey heiN na waapis hum

[Amal]

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@Pakeeza

Yeh tou waqt hi bataaey ga… Wait and watch:~)

“hum deikheiN ge…laazim hey ke hum bhi deikheiN ge…” :~)

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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^ :=)

[chodhry]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

@Amal

na’jaaney kis gumaan ke behlaawey meiN uljah kar
wo saath to chala aaya hey par chalta hey kahaaN tak

imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

By: Amal

Each and every word.

Thanks Amal!

[chodhry]

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@Koyal

suna tha isi leay paish-e-khemat hia

***Tum jo chaaho to kisi roz yuNhi chaltey chaltey ***
***phir usi raah pe do chaar qadam waapis aana ***
***wo raah jo ley ke tumheiN door chali aai hey ***
***usi raah pe zaraa deikhna ke ab bhi shaaed ***
***kaheiN door muntazir ho pas-e-gubaar koi ***
***tumharey paas na agarcha ho shumaar koi ***
***hawaa ka qaafla aawaara koi bataaey tumheiN ***
***kisi ki sulagti hui aas ka dia dikhaey tumhey ***
***guzrey lamhaat ki guzargaah sey guzartey huwey ***
***kitaab-e-yaad ke aaoraaq ko ulat’tey huwey ***
***jaaney kya socho tum jaaney kya guzrey tum par ***
***uljah ke reh jao kisi pal sey ya wapis chal do ***
***gira do aaNkhoN sey aaNsu ya shaed haNs do ***
***phir bhi mumkin ho to kisi roz yuNhi chaltey chaltey ***
***usi raah pe do chaar qadam waapis aana…! ***

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Wapis chalney sey kounsa koi ferq perrey ga. Move on buddy

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

chodhry sahab kahaaN paey jaatey heiN aaj kal aap? Looooooooooong time, no see :( Sab kheriat to hey na?

[chodhry]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Amal yeh nahien kahoon ga ka time nahien milta. Bohat time zaya kerta hoon on daily basis :) bas ab dil nahien kerta shayeri karney ko ya perhney ko. apney aap mein confined ho gya hoon. kuch derwaazey door bhohat peechey band ker aya hoon, hamsafar, rasta, manzil sab kuch badal gya hey. yeh shayerii wapis udher bullatee hey aur derwaazwy key us paar sey wo manoos dastak aisey lagta hey dil key ander sey aa rhi hey es liye jaan boojh ker nahien avoid kerta hoon ab. :)

wo ishq ju ham sey rooth gya, ab us ka haal sunayien kia :)

[Amal]

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@chodhry

Amal yeh nahien kahoon ga ka time nahien milta. Bohat time zaya kerta hoon on daily basis bas ab dil nahien kerta shayeri karney ko ya perhney ko. apney aap mein confined ho gya hoon. kuch derwaazey door bhohat peechey band ker aya hoon, hamsafar, rasta, manzil sab kuch badal gya hey. yeh shayerii wapis udher bullatee hey aur derwaazwy key us paar sey wo manoos dastak aisey lagta hey dil key ander sey aa rhi hey es liye jaan boojh ker nahien avoid kerta hoon ab.

wo ishq ju ham sey rooth gya, ab us ka haal sunayien kia

Lo, aek aur changa, bhala aadmi ishq ki bheint charrh gaya

[chodhry]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

:)

[WiseGuy]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

b0hat kh00b
thank you for sharing

[Amal]

Re: DeikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

Thanx a lot WiseGuy

@chodhry

…bas ab dil nahien kerta shayeri karney ko ya perhney ko. apney aap mein confined ho gya hoon. kuch derwaazey door bhohat peechey band ker aya hoon, hamsafar, rasta, manzil sab kuch badal gya hey. yeh shayerii wapis udher bullatee hey aur derwaazwy key us paar sey wo manoos dastak aisey lagta hey dil key ander sey aa rhi hey es liye jaan boojh ker nahien avoid kerta hoon ab.

wo ishq ju ham sey rooth gya, ab us ka haal sunayien kia

Kisi ney kaha tha: girtey heiN sheh’sawaar hi meidaan-e-jang meiN

Faiz sahab bhi aap ke leeye aek message chorr kar gaey the:

@Faiz

Tum dil ko sambhaalo jis meiN abhi
so tarha ke nashtar tooteiN ge

So chodhry sahab dil ko sambhalo yaar, abhi to zindagi parri hey