Dedicated to Amal

Amal · January 21, 2002, 11:00pm

** Roshni sey bohat pyaar tha to aaNkhoN ko roshan kar letey bhala aaNdhiyoN ke beech tumhey deeye jalaa ke kya mila

chalo pyar tak to theek tha magar ye pooja kis leeye
ik apney jesey bashar ko tumhey khuda banaa ke kya mila

aatish-e-ishq to tham gai par fiza hey ab bhi dhuwaN dhuwaN
usey aag laga ke kya mila, tumhey aag bujha ke kya mila

nahi zindagi ke falsafey meiN sab saaNs leney sey muttasil
jab dil ki dunya hi lut gai to tumhey sar bacha ke kya mila

is gup tanhai ke aalam meiN ye baam-o-dar kya boleiN ge
sarrkoN ka shor hi behtar tha, tumhey ghar pe aa ke kya mila

By: Amal

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

NikamiJano · January 21, 2002, 11:21pm

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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

Shab-e-Hijar · January 21, 2002, 11:22pm

Beautiful

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chand_chehra · January 22, 2002, 12:43am

bohat hi khoob amal

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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~

juMurA · January 22, 2002, 8:02am

Amal as usual

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Shaam-e-Firaq · January 22, 2002, 8:33am

bery bery bery bery guuuuuuuddddd

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milta to kuch nahin magar…

yeh jaante hain hum aur maante hain hum
phir bhi diya jalaanay ki Arzoo rakhte hain hum,
yeh jaante hain charagh bujh hi jaana hai
itni Taez hawaaon mein
par iss dil ka kyaa karain hum
Jo Ziddi bhi hai aur machalta bhi hai
khaer jo hoga dekha jae ga
jab Taez hawaain diyaa bujha jaain gi
tab yeh pagal dil bhi bujh jae ga…

my own poetry

dont laugh after reading this apki poetry parh ke yaad aa gai to likh di hum ne

“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”

[This message has been edited by Shaam-e-Firaq (edited January 22, 2002).]

Amal · January 22, 2002, 2:59pm

** Nikami ji** aap ney to hameiN saaf saaf angoottha hi dikha diya

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Shab-e-Hijar pasandeedgi ke leeye shukriya

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CC and juMurA, aap donoN ka bhi bohat shukriya

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Amal · January 22, 2002, 3:01pm

Arey is meiN hasney ki kya baat hey Shaam-e-Firaq, … it’s really very good

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…Thanx for sharing

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

system · January 22, 2002, 3:06pm

gr8

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Pramod · January 22, 2002, 4:23pm

bahot achha hai..Amal Sahab..Just great...

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

hayaa · January 22, 2002, 4:32pm

Amal, I say again, you should publish your work. It's superb.

tumhay ghar pay aa kay kiya mila

wah

Capricorn · January 22, 2002, 8:35pm

Excellent Amal…Why dont you follow peoples’ advice of publishing your work? You will get more fans than you have already..kia pata koi Madhuri marne lage Amal kee shairee pe

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Hope you had seen this movie?
Good poem Amal..Lajawab

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Akif_zeb_1 · January 22, 2002, 8:46pm

very nice amal..

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yaar aap waqaee main publish kar loo apna kaam.. its good.. aur kise ustaad ko daikha diya karoo … iss main mazeed nikhaar aa jaaiay gaa..

mairay dill mairay mussafir

Amal · January 22, 2002, 11:07pm

Thanx very much Pramod

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Haya, I say again, thanx for the idea. I really appreciate your comments and value your idea. I guess I should think about it

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Cap itney hi fans kafi heiN na…aur kya karooN ga

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Wesey ye Madhuri wala incentive khoob de rahey ho aap mujhey…abhi tak yaad hey?

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But anyway, thanx for the suggestion and your comments

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Akif aap ka bhi bohat bohat shukriya

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Aap ki ustaad waali baat bilkul theek hey…meiN isi leeye to yahaN post karta hooN ke aap logoN ke comments sey pata chaley ke meiN sahi ja raha hooN ya nahi. Ustaad dhoondna to bohat mushkil kaam hey, lekin aap ko ya kisi aur ko koi taseeh samajh meiN aaey to mujhey bila-jhijak bata satak hey…meiN mamnooN hoN ga

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

KinaRa · January 23, 2002, 12:11am

Amal
beautiful…think about k sab sahi kah ray
aik koi may be jhooti tareef karta ho sab tu nahi kar saktey…jo anghoothay dekhatey un ki parwa choro jee…baqion ki suno

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it’ Really Really …!

musaafir · January 23, 2002, 12:19am

bahut khuub dost.

Regards

Gemini_the_Great · January 26, 2002, 3:36am

Amal Bhai… boht hi zabardast

each and every word of ghazal is

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I know yay ham jaison ke liyay hai so I wouldn’t ask u to publish … yad aya na

As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters. – Seneca

Amjad_Chohan · January 26, 2002, 10:01am

khoobsourt baatain ki hain Amal!.

BholiBhali · January 26, 2002, 9:40pm

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aatish-e-ishq to tham gai par fiza hey ab bhi dhuwaN dhuwaN
usey aag laga ke kya mila, tumhey aag bujha ke kya mila

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wah...bohat khoobsurat ghazal hay!

Akif_zeb_1 · January 26, 2002, 10:16pm

amal its not just posting here you can even show it to your urdu teacher if u have one.. yaa kis aisya banday ko daikhaa doo jo keh poetry passand karta ho ya at least khud poet hoo...

mairay dill mairay mussafir