Thanks GTG, Amjad Bhaiand Rahila ji and Welcome
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Akif meiN koshish karooN ga ke koi mera kaam check karney waala mil jaey…lekin aap ki raey bhi bohat aehem ho gi merey leeye
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…
Amal ji aap sirf pal do pal ke shayar nahi hain. I also thought this ghazal was by a famous poet. Ap ne pal do pal ki shayari se mujhe heran kar diya hai kyun ke ap ke likhi hui pehli ghazal aj parhi hai mein ne.
Shaam-e-Firaaq your poem was also very very very very nice. I loved it because it was worded simply.
Jab tak is message board mein rahoon gi, mujhe lagta hai ke baar baar impress hoti rahoon gi.
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~ Mehshar mein le gayi thi, tabiyat ki saadgi
Lekin bare khuloos se hum laut aaye hain…
Thanx so much for your compliments
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aap to khud “Jaan-e-Ghazal” ho … aap ke bagheir to ghazal, ghazal hi nahi rehti
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stay around for more herangi
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…
[This message has been edited by Amal (edited January 27, 2002).]