~ dastaq dil pe ~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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kaun dastaq dil pe dene aaya hai
yaad hai teri, ya gham ka saaya hai

apni qismat hi raqeeboN jaisee hai
aaj kyuN shikwaa zubaaN pe aaya hai

wo humaare na sahi, hum unkey hai
humne aksar dil ko yuN behlaaya hai

jiski thi chaahat, wo mera na huaa
jo naseeboN meiN likha tha, paaya hai

maan lo jo hai muqaddar meiN likkha
zindagi ne bas ye hi samjhaaya hai

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:k:

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thanx:)

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Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *

maan lo jo hai muqaddar meiN likkha
zindagi ne bas ye hi samjhaaya hai

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nahi u must write it ur self what u want in ur life as Allama Iqbal said

Hundi ko kar buland itnaa.....
Kay har takdir say phalay ....
Huda Banday say yea punchay .....
bata tari raza kiya hai...... thats more like it( if u can red it :( ) b

but it is nice poem.... :)

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Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *

maan lo jo hai muqaddar meiN likkha
zindagi ne bas ye hi samjhaaya hai

[/QUOTE]

pAr IsS dIl Ko KaUn SAmAjHaE:(

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Good1.

Keep it up:-)

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Re: Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

Awww AD thanks for reading.:flower2: People usually want something else,aur hota kuch aur hai.:frowning:

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Awww Dewanu,dil ko toh buss dil hi samjha saktha hai.:flower1:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Good1.

Keep it up:-)
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thank you for liking it.:)

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Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *

kaun dastaq dil pe dene aaya hai
yaad hai teri, ya gham ka saaya hai

apni qismat hi raqeeboN jaisee hai
aaj kyuN shikwaa zubaaN pe aaya hai

wo humaare na sahi, hum unkey hai
humne aksar dil ko yuN behlaaya hai

jiski thi chaahat, wo mera na huaa
jo naseeboN meiN likha tha, paaya hai

maan lo jo hai muqaddar meiN likkha
zindagi ne bas ye hi samjhaaya hai

[/QUOTE]

MQ, i was trying to find a quote that i really liked, but every sher that i read...i loved...great job!
thoda ghamgheen zaroor hai, but excellent poem!

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MQ nice poem :k:

AD it’s Khuda & Khudi, not huda and hudi :slight_smile:

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*Originally posted by zidee: *

MQ, i was trying to find a quote that i really liked, but every sher that i read...i loved...great job!
thoda ghamgheen zaroor hai, but excellent poem!
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Aww thank you.Glad ke App ko pasan aya.:)

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Thank You Sohail.:flower2:

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nice… :k:

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Bohat khoob

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Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *

wo humaare na sahi, hum unkey hai
humne aksar dil ko yuN behlaaya hai

[/QUOTE]

Very nice ... buhat khoob ... It makes me remember

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WOW, beautiful yaara :k::k:

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thank you dilsay jee ,HH ,Hawkeye ,and Vivo :flower2:

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sigh

bohat khoob MQ :k: :slight_smile:

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thanks passo.:hug: