~ dastaq dil pe ~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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apni qismat hi raqeeboN jaisee hai
aaj kyuN shikwaa zubaaN pe aaya hai

wo humaare na sahi, hum unkey hai
humne aksar dil ko yuN behlaaya hai

Good one .. ** MQ **

Thanks for sharing.............

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Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

wow , itni achi ghazal aur meri nazar hi nahi pari chalo khair
very good MQ :k: thanx for sharing ek ek shair kamal hai bal k dhamal hai :flower2:

wo humaare na sahi, hum unkey hai
humne aksar dil ko yu.n behlaaya hai

wah jee wah

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sohail aap ne bilkul sahi correction ki hai :k: mien bhi karne hi laga thah

acha AD ne likha hai na Hundi mien samjha salan pakane wali handi ki baat kar raha hai :hehe:

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Awww ty :flower2: .Wase App ki poems bohut hi nice hoti hain.:flower1:

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Re: Re: ~ dastaq dil pe ~

Shuker hai App nai meri poem dekhi toh hai:snooty: Thank you for liking it Umer.:flower1:

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well, u r always welcome
waise tell me one thing y u naak charaying :snooty:

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Kun ke dehr kar di hai app nai parne main.:smash:

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Chalo der se sahi pari tu hai na :slight_smile:
wo kehte hien na der aye drust aye :wink:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Zakhmi Umar: *

Chalo der se sahi pari tu hai na :)
wo kehte hien na der aye drust aye ;)
[/QUOTE]

Haan jee shukria ,app nai pari toh hai.:)