dasht-e-wafa mai pyaas ka alam ajeeb tha

Shab-e-Hijar · July 25, 2007, 7:48pm

dasht-e-wafa mai pyaas ka alam ajeeb tha
dasht-e-wafa mai pyaas ka alam ajeeb tha
dekha to ek dard ka dariya kareeb tha

guzray jidhar jidhar say tamana kay qafilay
har har ek qadam mai nishaa’n saleeb tha

kuch asi mehraba’n to na thi hum pay zindagi
kyu har koi jaha’n mai hamra raqeeb tha

kya kya laho say apnay kya hum nay surkhroo
is daur kay nagar ko jo dil say kareeb tha

apna pata to is nay diya tha mujhay karam
mai khud hi khogya to ye mera naseeb tha

AQ · July 25, 2007, 8:15pm

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WoWWWWWWW..

beautiful

High-Tech · July 25, 2007, 8:17pm

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apna pata to is nay diya tha mujhay karam
mai khud hi khogya to ye mera naseeb tha

good stuff

muncho · July 25, 2007, 8:55pm

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kuch asi mehraba’n to na thi hum pay zindagi
kyu har koi jaha’n mai hamra raqeeb tha
ye kuj sochnay ki baat maalom parti

NikamiJano · July 25, 2007, 10:05pm

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Beautiful gazal shabo thanks for sharing with AQ :p

redidentity · July 26, 2007, 4:43am

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very nice.. :)

Isra_Chaudhary · July 26, 2007, 5:29am

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buhat zabardust Ghazal haii http://www.paklinks.com/gs/imagehosting/4240646a830bfc2c6e.gif
es ghazal k har shair buhat khubsurat haii
thanks 4 sharing sach a beautiful piecehttp://www.paklinks.com/gs/imagehosting/4240646a830bfc2c6e.gif %between%

Aqls · July 26, 2007, 6:30am

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simpy superb

Shab-e-Hijar · July 26, 2007, 5:25pm

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shukar hai ap ko bhi hamra post kya kuch acha laga

Shab-e-Hijar · July 26, 2007, 5:25pm

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soch kar hamy bhi bataye kya maloom para

Shab-e-Hijar · July 26, 2007, 5:26pm

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:halo:

ap kay sath bhi to ki hai

AQ · July 26, 2007, 5:27pm

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(notes down in his diary for next competition for more negative marking)

Shab-e-Hijar · July 26, 2007, 5:38pm

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awam say panga hai nahi changa :nono3:

AQ · July 26, 2007, 5:40pm

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maiN bhee tau awaam hee hooN

aik competition kaa judge bunn kar awaam saY thoRa hee niklaa hooN :hinna:

Sheal · July 26, 2007, 5:49pm

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beautiful shab-e-hijar

SJ · July 26, 2007, 6:13pm

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*guzray jidhar jidhar say tamana kay qafilay* *har har ek qadam mai nishaa'n saleeb tha*

apna pata to is nay diya tha mujhay karam
mai khud hi khogya to ye mera naseeb tha

Wah Bohat Khubsurat ghazal Hai :k:
Amazing

Prince_Ali · July 26, 2007, 8:39pm

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nice one :k:

IS · July 26, 2007, 9:17pm

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beautiful :-)

Shab-e-Hijar · July 27, 2007, 6:35am

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pasand karnay ka shukriya

EEMAAN · July 27, 2007, 3:19pm

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Beautiful..