Dasht-e-gubaar

Amal · January 29, 2003, 10:39pm

Dasht-e-gubaar

Na khaab hi apna alag sey tha
na khayaal hi apna kamaal tha
so is janooN ke jahaan-e-azaab meiN
na to tu hi pehli nazeer thi
na to meiN hi pehli misaal tha
na meiN naya ke bicharr gaya
na tu nai ke nahi mili
to is firaaq ke dasht-e-gubaar meiN
kya hey jo pehley nahi huwa!

Kabhi Laila, MajnuoN ke naam sey
kabhi sassi, PunooN ke naam sey
wohi saarey qissey azaab sey
wohi fasl-e-zulm haalaat ki
jo kabhi aek rut meiN ug gai
kabhi dooji rut meiN jaa basi
hajoom-e-ummeed-e-wisaal ki
wohi na’muraad si paheliyaaN
jo kabhi samajh na aa sakeiN
taskheer-e-rasmo-o-riwaaj ki
wohi dil-aazaar si guchiyaaN
jo ulajh gaieN to ulajh gaeiN

So dil ke zamaan-o-makaan meiN
ye ghuttan si hey to kis leeye!
ehsaas ke jism-o-jaan meiN
ye chubhan si hey to kis leeye!
meri dil’ruba mujhey ye bataa
is firaaq ke dasht-e-gubaar meiN
kya hey jo pehley nahi huwa!!!

By: Amal

nikii · January 29, 2003, 11:41pm

wowwwwwwwwwwwww bhut khooob zaberdasttt :k:

aadhoorighazal · January 30, 2003, 12:24am

SUPERB.......its simply beautiful. thanks Amal, and Amal thanks for every thing........

WiseGuy · January 30, 2003, 1:35am

Bohat khoob, thanks for sharing :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 30, 2003, 4:33am

excellent:k::k::k::k:
thanks for sharing:flower1:
and plz try to come regularly on gupshup:)

Philanthrope · January 30, 2003, 6:33am

Awsome :k:

Dilsay · January 30, 2003, 9:27am

It is beautiful like always....

NikamiJano · January 30, 2003, 12:13pm

Re: Dasht-e-gubaar

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
**Dasht-e-gubaar*

Na khaab hi apna alag sey tha
na khayaal hi apna kamaal tha
so is janooN ke jahaan-e-azaab meiN
na to tu hi pehli nazeer thi
na to meiN hi pehli misaal tha
na meiN naya ke bicharr gaya
na tu nai ke nahi mili
to is firaaq ke dasht-e-gubaar meiN
kya hey jo pehley nahi huwa!

wohi saarey qissey azaab sey
wohi fasl-e-zulm haalaat ki
jo kabhi aek rut meiN ug gai
kabhi dooji rut meiN jaa basi
hajoom-e-ummeed-e-wisaal ki
wohi na'muraad si paheliyaaN
jo kabhi samajh na aa sakeiN
taskheer-e-rasmo-o-riwaaj ki
wohi dil-aazaar si guchiyaaN
jo ulajh gaieN to ulajh gaeiN

So dil ke zamaan-o-makaan meiN
ye ghuttan si hey to kis leeye!
ehsaas ke jism-o-jaan meiN
ye chubhan si hey to kis leeye!
meri dil'ruba mujhey ye bataa
is firaaq ke dasht-e-gubaar meiN
kya hey jo pehley nahi huwa!!!

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Beautiful Amal like always....

guzaR he jaieY ghi aa'ey dost teRay hijaR ki raat
k tuj se bhaR k teRa daRd hai meRa dumsaaz..

Amal · January 30, 2003, 1:02pm

Thanx a lot nikii, aadhoorighazal, WiseGuy, P}{ä®mä©Ï§t, Dilsay and NikamiJi...pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya :)

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
plz try to come regularly on gupshup:)
[/QUOTE]

"Qadar kho deta hey roz ka aana jaana" ;)

udaasaankhein · January 30, 2003, 4:46pm

gr8 job..when are u publishing deewan-e-amal?

Amal · January 30, 2003, 6:29pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by udaasaankhein: *
..when are u publishing deewan-e-amal?
[/QUOTE]

Deewaana hone ke baad :)

chand_chehra · January 30, 2003, 6:45pm

simply beautiful amal :k:

Lamhay · January 30, 2003, 6:46pm

beautiful!

andha_qanoon · January 30, 2003, 6:54pm

This reminds me of this sher by Bahadur Shah Zafar

**
Na kisi ka Aankhon ka noor hun ,Na kisi ke dil ka Qarar hun
Jo kisi ke Kaam na Aa ske main woh ek Musht-e-Ghubar hun
**

system · January 30, 2003, 8:42pm

bohat khoob, :k:

NikamiJano · January 31, 2003, 3:09am

ur welcome any tame :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 31, 2003, 4:53am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *
"Qadar kho deta hey roz ka aana jaana" ;)

[/QUOTE]

ap aur qadar koh dee yeh ho nahi sakta.aur agar qadar kohae gay bhi to woh koi aur ho gay.ap nahi:)
yahaan boht se loog ap ka roz intazar kartae hain:)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 31, 2003, 12:31pm

Re: Dasht-e-gubaar

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
**Dasht-e-gubaar*

Na khaab hi apna alag sey tha
na khayaal hi apna kamaal tha
so is janooN ke jahaan-e-azaab meiN
na to tu hi pehli nazeer thi
na to meiN hi pehli misaal tha
na meiN naya ke bicharr gaya
na tu nai ke nahi mili
to is firaaq ke dasht-e-gubaar meiN
kya hey jo pehley nahi huwa!
..........

So dil ke zamaan-o-makaan meiN
ye ghuttan si hey to kis leeye!
ehsaas ke jism-o-jaan meiN
ye chubhan si hey to kis leeye!
meri dil'ruba mujhey ye bataa
is firaaq ke dasht-e-gubaar meiN
kya hey jo pehley nahi huwa!!!

By: Amal
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Be-had Umda Amal Thanks for sharing :)

Capricorn · January 31, 2003, 3:46pm

I envy the flow in your poetry Amal. You are amazing when it comes to expressing your thoughts. :k:

Amal · January 31, 2003, 7:19pm

Am obliged! Thanx a lot for this news

Thanx a lot Cap…am short of words to reciprocate

Gul nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya