Dasht-e-gubaar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Zabardast :k:

Bohat achi hai :slight_smile: I didnā€™t know that gupshup has such great poets :flower1:

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Re: Dasht-e-gubaar

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
**Dasht-e-gubaar*
Kabhi Laila, MajnuoN ke naam sey
kabhi sassi, PunooN ke naam sey
wohi saarey qissey azaab sey
wohi fasl-e-zulm haalaat ki
jo kabhi aek rut meiN ug gai
kabhi dooji rut meiN jaa basi
hajoom-e-ummeed-e-wisaal ki
wohi na'muraad si paheliyaaN
jo kabhi samajh na aa sakeiN
taskheer-e-rasmo-o-riwaaj ki
wohi dil-aazaar si guchiyaaN
jo ulajh gaieN to ulajh gaeiN
By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

buhat khoob

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abhi aaap ney dekha hi kia hai;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

Am obliged! Thanx a lot for this news :)

so ab ap gupshup pe roz aye gay:)

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Poets? KahaaN heiN poets???:)ā€¦Thanx for liking it anyway :slight_smile:

Ji meiN taqreeban roz hi aata hooN GS parā€¦you can see this :slight_smile:

Galaxy nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya :slight_smile:

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wonderfulā€¦:flower1:

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Simply Superb :k: :k: man I am in love with your poetry :love:

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Pleasure is all mine:)

&Passionate, thanx a lot:)

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:eek: :eek: :rolleyes: o_o Azam Amal larka hain ā€¦:slight_smile:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *
Ji meiN taqreeban roz hi aata hooN GS parā€¦you can see this :slight_smile:

i mean mostly time u donā€™t.now-a-days u r:)
thanks for coming:flower1:

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Amal aap ki poem buhat achee hai aur wakai tareef kai kabil hai ...i don't come here everyday but sure lookforward to reading your poem whenever i do come .........they are nice !

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Excellent Amalā€¦:k: :slight_smile:

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Itā€™s always lovely to know that you matter:)ā€¦thanx for informing me of this:flower1:

Guest7777 am extremely thankful to you for stopping to read my poetry. Thanx a lot:)

Maheen2002 nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya:)