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Sonia.. poem is sweet.. but.. i feel k it is not among the best of urs.. there are few laggings.. 
magar.. feeling is there.. 
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aaww…thanks…
u r rite…jaldi mein likhee thee…soocha share kar lon…
thanks alot for encouragement!!!
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Beeautifull Sonii.. 
P.S: Rania khan kaun hai ??
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dnt u know???
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^ Naa 
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nice, very nice :k:
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Thanks Alot Ali Bhai:@:
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oh its you sonia_jee.... wots up with people shortening their nicks on gupshup these days
i was like, thats a pretty good nazam and the person has alot of posts so why have they not been posting before
anyways... bohat achi hai, aap ki shaairi har nazam kay saath behtar hoti jaa rahi hai
if i remember correctly, you started just a little while ago.
Re: Dard Phail Jaiy ga..........ma New nazam...!!!
oh its you sonia_jee.... wots up with people shortening their nicks on gupshup these days
i was like, thats a pretty good nazam and the person has alot of posts so why have they not been posting before
anyways... bohat achi hai, aap ki shaairi har nazam kay saath behtar hoti jaa rahi hai
if i remember correctly, you started just a little while ago.
wel ..............:)
u r rite..........mein nay haal mein he likhna start kiya hai..........:)
thanks alot for ur appreciationz:)
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bohut khub sj, amazing… :k:
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Thank You Ali:@:
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ohhhhh its u sonia?
zabardast hai nazm
u started it very lytly but thn gathred it qut strongly
specialy last 2 parts me nazm ka flow shaandaar hai
buhat khoob
keep it up
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yea its me:(
aww thanks Deadsoul…
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App nay id kyun change kiya:konfused:
Nice poem Sonia!!!
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cool nazm yar very nice :k:
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:aq:
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thanks!!!
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me ko eyebrows kyun dekhatee ho:(
phir me wohi kahun gee nahi theek banay 