Dard Phail Jaiy ga..........ma New nazam...!!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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han yaar kah dou kya faraq parta hai:(

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nai farq parta phir nai kahtee :(

The Random Thread
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nahin Tum kaho:naraz:

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nai mera mood nahi hai ab :snooty:

:chai:

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:snooty:
acha theek hai:(

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Beautiful sharing keep it up SJ …it’s really awsome
aur meray seenay maiN
kuch
phir se toot jaa’ey gha :bummer:

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u are a good writer sonia- i really admire ur work. its not easy to write- i have tried it!!

Have you ever considered GS to find a life partner
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ohh Thanks Dear…i m nt a perfect writer…just try kar laytee hon…kabhi kabhi teernishanay par lag jataaa hai:@:
wel app nay try kiya n bataya bhi nahin:naraz:

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:frowning:
acha…Chalo thanks for reading Koyal

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sonia very nice kya yeh poem tum ne khud likhi hai

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wah khoob. :k:
phir say toot jaye ga, last time ka toota kaisay jooRa tha? :slight_smile: