Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image

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Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

hum ajab musaafir-e-dasht they k chaley tou chaltey chaley gaey

kisi aab-e-jao ki sadaa pey bhi kahiN raastey meiN rukey nahi
kai aur ahl-e-talab miley mujhey raah-e-shaoq meiN ham qadam
jinhey kar raha tha talaash meiN wohi log mujh ko miley nahi

Wow.. now do we call that perfect or perfect :k:

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

ye rastey kahaan ko jaatey hein yahaan thokar kesey lagti hey,
jab apni zubaN meiN waqt hum ko samjhaey ga tab deikhein ge
dil torr ke jaaney waaley ko waapis paa kar kya karna hey,
jab subha ka bhoola shaam dhaley ghar aaey ga tab deikheiN ge

zabardast GUL… behtreen.. you are awesome with image poetry