Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image

@AQ

laikin jhanjhare: if we look at the image the caravan is actually on its way. how does “ummiidvaar baiThaa hooN” come into the picture? On the other hand, is the image depicting the “raah guzar” mentioned in second misra’? I mean can we justify this sher by saying that the poet is actually watching that place where he wanted to be in his dreams or from far away which is in the image and he is saying those words?

What is your take on my explanation?

its like looking at it from outside…ke manzar milte gayen, magar ‘justujuu’ na mili :hinna:
almost abstract!