Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
ap ke liea nehe heyn mere liea toh heyn :halo:
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
Saahil pe to hongey sab ke apney apney log
reh jaaey gi kashtii ki har baat samandar mein
:D
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
^ :k:
One more:
LauT jaaaaati hai maseeeeha kee nazar saahiL saY
mujh maiN doobay tau merey dard ka andaza karey
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
Teergi Atraaf Main Be'Had Thi Lekin Ay Muneer
Sehr-e-Gham Ne Iss Main Misl-e-Noor Ker Rakha Mujhe
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
Muneer Niazi :k: always hitting the nail on head… without mentioning the objects in the image, the sher is complete to it’s meaning… thanks Ahmer for sharing 
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
zabardast :k:
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
ager koe ganja hoa to bes gea
mohara bola tah nah:p
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
Manzilon Pe Aake Lut-Te Hain Dilon Ke Caravan
Kashtiyaan Saahil Pe Aksar Doobti Hain Pyaar Ki
Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
Ye Saaniha Bhi Muhabbat Main Baar'ha Guzara
Ke Uss Ne Haal Bhi Poocha To Aankh Bhar Aaii
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(ess image k liye mera khayaal mulaheza hu…)
ye sham,ye haseen pal…
khamosh sa samandar…,
aur pur sukon saahil…
sahil pay kashtiyaan bhi
hen muntazir tumhaari
essy pehly k aaftab dhaly
gar hu sakay tu aao…
kuch pal yahan bitaalen
ess shaam ko churaalen,
yaadon men ham basalen!