Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Share from the poetry you know, what comes in your mind after seeing the following Image:

http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/14734/lakeside.jpg

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Here is what comes in my mind at the moment:

Hum Loug Samander kaY bichRay huaY SaahiL haiN
Iss paaaaar bheee Tanhaai, uss paar bhee Tanhaaai

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The first shair comes in my mind :

Jab Kashti Saabit-o-Salim Thi, Saahil Ki Tamanna Kis Ko Thi
Ab Aisi Shikasta Kashti Par Saahil Ki Tamanna Kaun Karay

BeING LonEly !!! sId !!!

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Good sher SID... I now have to find an image with Shikasta kashti in it :-D

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lol mujhe to shikista he lagii who knows ke us ke andar kitnay holes hain :p

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Anwer Maqsood's masterpiece comes in mind:

Dosti ka ek samandar
Unginat Saahil wafa kay
Apnay seenay maiN chupaye
Jaanay kab say beh raha thaa
Daf'atun ek mauj ubhree
MotiyoN kee shakal maiN
Dhaltay huay alfaaz, jumlay
Khood-bakhood dil say uThay
Lub tak gaye
Dil ka her ek bojh lafzoN nay uThaya
Fik'r ka her lamha ek jumlay say Takraya
Bhikher ker kho gaya
Gham ka raiza raiza
Kuch baatoN ki ro maiN beh gaya

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u need glasses man :p

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^ thats wot i was gonna say :D

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Sundar Komal Sapnoun Key Barat Guzar Gaiee Jaana~n
Dhoop Ankhoun Tak Aa Puhanchii Hai Raat Guzar Gaiee Jaana~n

ROJA JANEMAN......
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Raha gardishon main har dum mere ishq ka sitara
kabhi dagmagaaiyi kashti,kabhi kho gaya kinara :(

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misaal,e abr-e-zameen ka libaas hu jaaoun

ju yuon nahi** tu samandar ki piyas hu jaaon**

tamam din ki kari dhoop men ye sochta hon

men shab k pichhly peher ka hiraas hu jaon

** (mohsin naqwi)**

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Bheegii Shaam Key Sahil Par KaShtiyaan Chup Chup Rehtii hein
jeisey Hijjr Kii Pehlii ChhOt Par Larkiyaan Chup Chup Rehtii hein

:D

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jealous :cb:

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awesome sher muddi bhai but I am unable to relate the thoughts with the image... Can you kindly elaborate to me....

The vague co-relation I can make is that "dhoop kaa aanKhoN tukk pahunchnaa" is similar to "kashti kaa kinaaraY tukk pahunchna"???

laikin yeh kashtiyaaN tau kinaaraY par hee haiN :p

Awesome

yeh itnaY achaY ash'aar tum kahaaN saY laati ho :ASA:

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wehen se :wink:

Whats in your wallet?
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:smiley:

ok here is one more:

Narm Rau Waqt Kay Dhaaray Pe Safeenay ThaY RawaaN
Saaahil-O-Beh’r Kay AaieeN Na Badaltay ThaY Kabhi
Na KhudaaoN Pe Bharosaa, Thaa Muqaddar Pe YaqeeN
Chaadar-e-Aab SaY toofaaN Na Ubaltay ThaY Kabhi

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moshkel words boht heyn :halo:

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Koi naheeN haiN :halo:

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muskhil words :sunnyboy:

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kahan chup chup rehti hain... itni ghalat bayani bhi achi nahin hoti
ro ro kay sub ki naak main dum kar daiti hain