Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

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Is second line Umeed?

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second is 'tarah'?

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No

Hint: start with "saud"

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Nobody is now answering so have to end this

Sabar ek taqat hay meri sakhti e ayyam mein
Is sift se aadmi gham mein faghan karta nahi

A sher from munir niazi's ghazal or nazam

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Well done, totally got us on this one.

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*........ kyaa hovegaa maaluum nahin *
*dil huaa hai .... dil daar kaa *

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ab, kisii? :hmmm:

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Na, maths kijye. :slight_smile:

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Aaqibat **Kia Hovega, Maloom Nahin
Dil Hua Hai **Mubtala
' Dildaar ka

(Wali M. Wali)

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Right. :k:

Now you post.

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hahaha...ab itnaa bhii waqt faaltoo nahiiN hai! :)

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______ Jab Bhi Kahin Lala-o-Gul ka Nikla

Baat Ponh’chi Wo ________________Tak

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first misra 'Zikr'?

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Close! :)

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Let me give a hint if difficult: Same poet said:

Sab Ne Dekha Faqat Alfaaz Ki Rangini Ko
Koi PonhCha Na Alfaaz Ki Gehraai Tak

@KKF :teggy: asatida ka kalaam lagta hai. Do the maths :slight_smile:

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first main 'tazkira'?

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Ji Janab! :)

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shair in post no. 135 from same Ghazal? I mean the missing word in second line should be hum-qafiya of 'Ranai' / 'Gehrai'?

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Baagh in second?