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Is second line Umeed?
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Is second line Umeed?
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second is ‘tarah’?
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No
Hint: start with “saud”
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Nobody is now answering so have to end this
Sabar ek taqat hay meri sakhti e ayyam mein
Is sift se aadmi gham mein faghan karta nahi
A sher from munir niazi’s ghazal or nazam
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Well done, totally got us on this one.
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**… kyaa hovegaa maaluum nahin **
**dil huaa hai … dil daar kaa **
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ab, kisii? ![]()
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Na, maths kijye. ![]()
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**Aaqibat **Kia Hovega, Maloom Nahin
Dil Hua Hai Mubtala’ Dildaar ka
(Wali M. Wali)
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Right. :k:
Now you post.
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hahaha…ab itnaa bhii waqt faaltoo nahiiN hai! ![]()
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______ Jab Bhi Kahin Lala-o-Gul ka Nikla
Baat Ponh’chi Wo ________________Tak
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first misra ‘Zikr’?
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Close! ![]()
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Let me give a hint if difficult: Same poet said:
Sab Ne Dekha Faqat Alfaaz Ki Rangini Ko
Koi PonhCha Na Alfaaz Ki Gehraai Tak
@KKF :teggy: asatida ka kalaam lagta hai. Do the maths ![]()
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first main ‘tazkira’?
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Ji Janab! ![]()
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shair in post no. 135 from same Ghazal? I mean the missing word in second line should be hum-qafiya of ‘Ranai’ / ‘Gehrai’?
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Baagh in second?