Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

[KKF]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

@KKF asatida ka kalaam lagta hai. Do the maths

abhii bahot neend aa rahii hai is liye sone jaa reahaa huN…iA kal subHo meN kar duuNgaa…sorry.

@Tahurra

Baagh in second?

baaGh lafz se misr’a Khaarij ul bahr ho jaayegaa.

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@KKF

abhii bahot neend aa rahii hai is liye sone jaa reahaa huN…iA kal subHo meN kar duuNgaa…sorry.

baaGh lafz se misr’a Khaarij ul bahr ho jaayegaa.

Gulistan tu kharij ul bahar nahi hoga?if baagh is not the word then second gulistan, yeh bhi guess hy without any maths

[diwana]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

shair in post no. 135 from same Ghazal? I mean the missing word in second line should be hum-qafiya of ‘Ranai’ / ‘Gehrai’?

Yes.

@Tahurra

Baagh in second?

No.

[muqawwee123]

@Tahurra

Gulistan tu kharij ul bahar nahi hoga?if baagh is not the word then second gulistan, yeh bhi guess hy without any maths

I think second misre main ik se ziada words missing hain? may be a compound word @diwana

[diwana]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

I think second misre main ik se ziada words missing hain? may be a compound word @diwana

Yes.

Let me add.

Baat Ponhchi Wo tere Paikar-e- __________ Tak.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@diwana

Yes.

No.

Ranai / gehrai…

May be qafiya’s in Faiz Saheb’s ghazal ‘chand nikle kisi janib teri zebai ka’ helpful.

chand nikale kisi janib teri zebai ka
rang badle kisi surat shab-e-tanhai ka

daulat-e-lab se phir ae khusrav-e-shirin-dahan
aj riza ho koi harf shanasai ka

dida-o-dil ko sambhalo ki sar-e-sham-e-firaq

saz-o-saman baham pahuncha hai rusvai ka

so:

Tazkira Jab Bhi Kahin Lala-o-Gul ka Nikla

Baat Ponh’chi Wo ________________Tak

second one is Rukh e Zaibai? But I think there must be ‘tere’ / ‘uske’ before the missing word.

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

I think second misre main ik se ziada words missing hain? may be a compound word @diwana

Yes may be milta julta lal o gul se yani ham wazan

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@diwana

Yes.

Let me add.

Baat Ponhchi Wo tere Paikar-e- __________ Tak.

Husn?

[diwana]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

Ranai / gehrai…

May be qafiya’s in Faiz Saheb’s ghazal ‘chand nikle kisi janib teri zebai ka’ helpful.

chand nikale kisi janib teri zebai ka
rang badle kisi surat shab-e-tanhai ka

daulat-e-lab se phir ae khusrav-e-shirin-dahan
aj riza ho koi harf shanasai ka

dida-o-dil ko sambhalo ki sar-e-sham-e-firaq

saz-o-saman baham pahuncha hai rusvai ka

so:

Tazkira Jab Bhi Kahin Lala-o-Gul ka Nikla

Baat Ponh’chi Wo ________________Tak

second one is Rukh e Zaibai? But I think there must be ‘tere’ / ‘uske’ before the missing word.

Aap Bohat Qareeb Pohunch Chukay Hain janab.

@Tahurra

Husn?

No.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@diwana

Yes.

Let me add.

Baat Ponhchi Wo tere Paikar-e- __________ Tak.

Ranai doosre shair main use hogaya. so, its not Paikar e Ranai. Then Paikar e Zebai?

[diwana]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

Ranai doosre shair main use hogaya. so, its not Paikar e Ranai. Then Paikar e Zebai?

Great!!!

Its by, Ali Ahmad Jaleel.

Kitnay Afsaane Banay Pyar Ki Ruswaai Tak
Meri Tanhaai Se Le Kar Teri AngRaai Tak…

Your turn.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

Haan usne jhalki dikhai, ik hi pal ko ______ main
Jano ik bijli lehrai, Aalam ik _______ huwa

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

Haan usne jhalki dikhai, ik hi pal ko ______ main
Jano ik bijli lehrai, Aalam ik _______ huwa

Weerany in first
roshan in second

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

Weerany in first
roshan in second

phir se try karen.

Hint: second line wala word aajkal kafi demand main hai

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

phir se try karen.

Hint: second line wala word aajkal kafi demand main hai

naya in second?Well naya pakistan se mere dimagh mein yehi araha hy, what is more demanding than this these daysblank

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

naya in second?Well naya pakistan se mere dimagh mein yehi araha hy, what is more demanding than this these daysblank

4 letter word starting with sheen

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

4 letter word starting with sheen

well mijhe lgtanahi phir bhi wild guess “sharab”

and for first i m guessing, khuwab

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

well mijhe lgtanahi phir bhi wild guess “sharab”

and for first i m guessing, khuwab

nahin. waise sharab peene ke baad banda kiya ho jata hai.. Qaim Ali Shah ka statement yaad hai?

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

nahin. waise sharab peene ke baad banda kiya ho jata hai.. Qaim Ali Shah ka statement yaad hai?

Nahi statement kabhi suna hee nhi yaad kaise hoga, waesy banda madhosh hojata hy or koi lafz nhi araha is wakt dimagh mein

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

nahin. waise sharab peene ke baad banda kiya ho jata hai.. Qaim Ali Shah ka statement yaad hai?

So its shaheed? My brother told me something about this i rem now, magar totally forget and googled qaim ali shah at news, found this
i could never reached this word otherwise