Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

KKF · December 15, 2014, 5:11am

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abhii bahot neend aa rahii hai is liye sone jaa reahaa huN…iA kal subHo meN kar duuNgaa…sorry.

baaGh lafz se misr’a Khaarij ul bahr ho jaayegaa.

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 5:18am

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Gulistan tu kharij ul bahar nahi hoga?if baagh is not the word then second gulistan, yeh bhi guess hy without any maths

diwana · December 15, 2014, 5:20am

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Yes.

No. :)

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 5:20am

I think second misre main ik se ziada words missing hain? may be a compound word @diwana

diwana · December 15, 2014, 5:22am

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Yes.

Let me add.

Baat Ponhchi Wo tere Paikar-e- __________ Tak.

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 5:25am

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Ranai / gehrai…

May be qafiya’s in Faiz Saheb’s ghazal ‘chand nikle kisi janib teri zebai ka’ helpful.

chand nikale kisi janib teri zebai ka
rang badle kisi surat shab-e-tanhai ka

daulat-e-lab se phir ae khusrav-e-shirin-dahan
aj riza ho koi harf shanasai ka

dida-o-dil ko sambhalo ki sar-e-sham-e-firaq

saz-o-saman baham pahuncha hai rusvai ka

so:

Tazkira Jab Bhi Kahin Lala-o-Gul ka Nikla

Baat Ponh’chi Wo ________________Tak

second one is Rukh e Zaibai? But I think there must be ‘tere’ / ‘uske’ before the missing word.

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 5:25am

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Yes may be milta julta lal o gul se yani ham wazan

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 5:27am

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Husn?

diwana · December 15, 2014, 5:30am

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Aap Bohat Qareeb Pohunch Chukay Hain janab.

No.

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 5:31am

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Ranai doosre shair main use hogaya. so, its not Paikar e Ranai. Then Paikar e Zebai?

diwana · December 15, 2014, 5:35am

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Great!!!

Its by, Ali Ahmad Jaleel.

Kitnay Afsaane Banay Pyar Ki Ruswaai Tak
Meri Tanhaai Se Le Kar Teri AngRaai Tak...

Your turn.

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 5:45am

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Haan usne jhalki dikhai, ik hi pal ko ______ main
Jano ik bijli lehrai, Aalam ik _______ huwa

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 5:49am

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Weerany in first
roshan in second

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 5:51am

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phir se try karen.

Hint: second line wala word aajkal kafi demand main hai

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 5:59am

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naya in second?Well naya pakistan se mere dimagh mein yehi araha hy, what is more demanding than this these daysblank

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 6:00am

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4 letter word starting with sheen

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 6:08am

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well mijhe lgtanahi phir bhi wild guess "sharab"

and for first i m guessing, khuwab

muqawwee123 · December 15, 2014, 6:10am

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nahin. waise sharab peene ke baad banda kiya ho jata hai.. Qaim Ali Shah ka statement yaad hai?

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 6:14am

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Nahi statement kabhi suna hee nhi yaad kaise hoga, waesy banda madhosh hojata hy or koi lafz nhi araha is wakt dimagh mein

Tahurra · December 15, 2014, 7:57am

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So its shaheed? My brother told me something about this i rem now, magar totally forget and googled qaim ali shah at news, found this
i could never reached this word otherwise