Choti Si Zindagani

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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***Itni chooti si Zindagani hai hamari
Aisi Zindagani mai kuch karney ko nahi milta
Pehle tumhary yaadoon may gume rehtay thay
Abh teri yaadoon ke saath saath to bhi nahi milta:halo:

Muskurati raho aye dost
Zindagi wapis nahi aati
Zindagi ko ro kar guzar diya to
Chehray Pay Muskurahat wapis nahi aati

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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

Since we have seen far better poetry from you, this was kinda unexpected and, by your own standards, quite below par. Sorry for the truth :( Looking for more and better :)

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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

No, i dont think so - i think d 2nd sounds good...keep it up! at least sum of us try...

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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

you are right i should be posting better poems

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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

aisi ghulti shabab ker baitha dil mera intikhab ker baitha
yeh samjh ker kay zindagi tum ho zindagi khurab ker baitha

dil lagaya tha dil lugi kay laya
ban gya rog zindagi kay lyay

aap ki maang mein sitaray hain
hum tarastay hain roshni kay lyay :D

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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

wah wah kia baat hai zabardast!:k:

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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

chor chor pakdo is ko but the other two are good who are they by:confused: coz aap ke tu nahin ho sakte chori kiye hue lagte any ways take care everone i am off now:D

latreen =)
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Re: Choti Si Zindagani

pk aap yeh kis ko keh rahi hain