Chehra Shanaas

[muqawwee123]

Wo kehta tha…

Main padh loon ga, jo likha hai un aankhon main
Jhalakta hai jo chehre per, chalakta hai jo baaton main

Wo kehta tha…

Bohut aasan hai insaan ko padh lena
Raaz khul jaate hain bus chand hi mulaqaaton main

Bohut dino baad mila to tha kuch khoya sa
Aankhen bujhi bujhi si chehra bhi tha roya sa

Hum ne poocha…

Kia ab bhi padhte ho chehron ko
hote hain kia raaz ab bhi ayaan?
Suraagh milte hain baaton se
kehti hain aankhen guzre kal ka bayan?

Wo bola…

Jeevan ki sab paheliyon main boojh nahin pae wo insaan hai
Chehray padhna mushkil thehra, kitabon ki zaban aasan hai

Bohut mushkil hai iss basti main logon ko padh panaa
her shakhs ne seekh liya dard ko chupaa janaa

Aankhen jo kehti hain, dil main wo hota nahin
Jhoot kehte hain chehre saare, batoon ka bhi bharosa nahin

[UZ]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

Nice :k:

[muqawwee123]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

^ Thanks for appreciation

[waleedhbk]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

Awesome Man …

[Shazia_Arif]

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bohat zabardast muqalma hai infact mujhe tu poetry men ye cheez innovative lagi but let Faseeh paen's comment here,wo zada sahi se bata saken ge that whether this way is acceptable or not per main poore wasooq se kehti hun k mujhe tu bohat achi lagi.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

@waleedhbk

Awesome Man …

@Shazia_Arif

bohat zabardast muqalma hai infact mujhe tu poetry men ye cheez innovative lagi but let Faseeh paen’s comment here,wo zada sahi se bata saken ge that whether this way is acceptable or not per main poore wasooq se kehti hun k mujhe tu bohat achi lagi.

Hosla Afzai keliye shukria

[Innocent_Smile]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

Nice poem **muqawwee123 :k:

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[sfaseehrabbani]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

**ایک اچھی کاوش ہے، داد پیش ہے لیکن اسے

نثری نظم ہی کہیں گے کیونکہ پہلے دو تین مصرعے

تو ایک بحر میں ہیں

جبکہ بعد میں بحر کا تعین نہیں ہو رہا۔

اس کے بارے میں کیا کہوں، وہ تو

اَن پڑھی سی کتاب جیسا ہے

اس کو پڑھنے کی آرزو ہے فصیحؔ

جانے وہ کس کتاب جیسا ہے**

[muqawwee123]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

Thanks for your beautiful comments Faseeh Bahi

[Sannan]

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Good one keep it up dude

[muqawwee123]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

Thanks Sannan

[fara]

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Buhat piyari nazm hay :k:

[system]

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loved it!

[enter10]

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Bohat Umdha Bro...........:K:

[muqawwee123]

Re: Chehra Shanaas

Bohat Umdha Bro...........:K:

Thanks enter10... kafi bachon wali poetry hai