Really it is a nice nazam I would like to hear more please post.Its nice some one is saying shaiiri in Punjabi.
Thanks, aik chotee sei Nazam sun legeye;
Is ka Unwan Hai "Aasaib"
"Bund Bohey Dai Pichoon,
Naa Kisey Mera Liya Ai,
Ujraiy Ghaa'r Nai Naloon Langhdeyaan,
Shauq Ai fair MaiNu Peya Ai"
Translation in plain english;
"Bhind the closed door, some one called me and that was the second time I had this impression while passing by an abandonded home"