Kabhi yun bhi to ho
Darya ka saahil ho
Pooray chand ki raat ho
Aur tum aao!
Kabhi yun bhi to ho
Pariyon ki mehfil ho
Koi tumhari baat ho
Aur tum aao!
Kabhi yun bhi to ho
Sooni her manzil ho
Koi na mere sath ho
Aur tum aao!
Kabhi yun bhi to ho
Yeh badal aisa toot k barsay
Mere dil ki terha milne ko
Tumhara dil bhi tarsay
Tum niklo ghar se
KAbhi yun bhi to ho
Tanhai ho,dil ho
Boondein hon,barsaat ho
Aur tum aao!
Kabhi yun bhi to ho!!
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Acha agar ye sab kuch ho jaye to kia ho ga?
wasi shah k khandan ka koi lagta hy
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Acha agar ye sab kuch ho jaye to kia ho ga?
wasi shah k khandan ka koi lagta hy
agar wasi shah hota tu kabhi post na karta...us ka itna standard nai k aisi nazam likh sakay
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acha laikn mujhy to ye standard ki nahi lagi 
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ab kiya may yahan mahwara likhoon aap k liyay…siyanay kehtay hain
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lol me ny parh liya tha aap ny jo likha
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sorry 
i shouldn’t have write it.
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koi baat nahi me kisi ko nahi btaun ge :)
now answer the question in post 2
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koi baat nahi me kisi ko nahi btaun ge :)
now answer the question in post 2
Baa’z oqaat kisi or kay milnay sa adam,
Apni hasti sa mulaqat bhi ho jaati hai..
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agar wasi shah hota tu kabhi post na karta...us ka itna standard nai k aisi nazam likh sakay
ab Wasi Shah itna gaya guzra bhi nahin...... Chandni raat ke hathon pe sawar utri hai.. suni hai ne?
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:k: naye
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That is more beautiful than this superficial one by Javed Akhtar 
be Pakistani buy Pakistani 
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please dont discuss wasi shah in this thread…i like him as a writer but he is not a poet… us jaisi azad nazmain koi tom dec harry bhi likh sakta hai , so … baqi aap samjhdaar hain
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please dont discuss wasi shah in this thread...i like him as a writer but he is not a poet... us jaisi azad nazmain koi tom dec harry bhi likh sakta hai , so .... baqi aap samjhdaar hain
Really. Lets agree to disagree. Khuda jisse izzat deta hai, uss main kuch gunn hote hain.. nahin to Tom Dick Herry Pakistan main bhi boht aur India main bhi beshumar hain
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Really. Lets agree to disagree. Khuda jisse izzat deta hai, uss main kuch gunn hote hain.. nahin to Tom Dick Herry Pakistan main bhi boht aur India main bhi beshumar hain
Khuda jisay chahata hai izzat deta hai..is say mujhay inkaar nai...lakin agar wo mashoor hai tu is ka matlab yeh nai k woo shair bhi acha hai...or mashoor woo dramay say ziayda howa tha, drama nikal doo ... or phir us k baad us ki book market may lay jaoo...may bhi dekhta kitnay loag us ko parhtay..or wasey bhi mummy dady lovers ko aisi he shairi appeal karti hai...i mean no offence to any one...but the fact is that jis shairi k aik aik lafaz may darya nai woo shairi shairi nai....nasar ko azad nazam bana dena bara karnama nai...
tu nay dewana banaya tu may dewana bana...
abb mujhay hosh ki dunia may tamasha na bana...
is jaisa aik shair bhi wasi shah ki shairi say dhond k laa doo...aik aik lafaz is shair ka samundar hai....
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:mirch: miyan saab… Parveen Shakir ke baad nae likhne walon main agar kisi ko sab se ziada gaya gaya hai to wo Wasi Shah hai.. Azad Nazm main bhi agar taranum ho tab hi wo gai ja sakti hai…
baqi ke liye itna hi kahoon ga: Pasand apni apni
There is compartmentalisation in Poetry when liking and disliking comes into field. A new writer may write something that can attract people more than old poets
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gujjar sb
but it doesn’t mean woo acha poet bhi hoooo…aap achay achay shairon say poch lain…k wasi shah ki shairi ka kiya muqaam hai…idar tu EYE to EYE mashoor ho jata hai…mashoori ki baat chorain…personal liking disliking to bhi chorain…shairi k standards pay he us ki shairi jaanch lain…
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or shair aap nay due hai…dhoond k lana hai aap nay
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jab kisi se Allah waste ka ber ho jae to koi daleel kaam nahin aati.. so this topic is closed at my end. aap Wasi Shah ko khat likh ke apne tahafuzaat ka izhar kar len :cobra:
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bhai ji Allah wastay ka bair hota tu us ki writing skills ki tareef karta?..lakin poetry…yahan aap ki baat manana mushkil hai…daleel tu may nay bhi dee hai…eye to eye ki…kiya abb woo reeshma say bara singer hai? aisay tu nai hota na…hamari baat ko bhi kuch wazan daien…aisay na karain…