bhai ji Allah wastay ka bair hota tu us ki writing skills ki tareef karta?...lakin poetry...yahan aap ki baat manana mushkil hai...daleel tu may nay bhi dee hai...eye to eye ki...kiya abb woo reeshma say bara singer hai? aisay tu nai hota na...hamari baat ko bhi kuch wazan daien...aisay na karain...
aap ki baat ko wazan dia tabhi ye behas yahan tak aai.. nahin to Wasi Shah ne konse mujhe paise dene hain. Javed Akhtar is good writer and I persoanlly like him, but comparing that experienced poet with Wasi Shah and totally calling Wasi Shah's poetry as sub-standard (Tom , Dick, Harry work) is beyond my understanding.. so no more wazan on this matter from my side
Achy achy shairun sy lol kbhe koi shair kahy ga k me bura hun? Aisy to koi bhe kisi sy mutafiq nahi hota baat to aap ki apni pasand py a jati hy k aap kisy acha shair or kisy bura tasawur krty hain or jisy aap acha kahen zaruri nahi wo sab ko bhe acha laga.Me bhe koi wasi shah ki fan nahi laikn aap ny jo poetry share ki sorry to say wo sirf aap ko he mutasir kr saki.Is k aik aik lafz me samandar to kia chota sa pond bhe nazar nahi aya
I guess this poem could be enjoyed only during college days.
and with music and that too by Jagjeet Singh. If it had been sung by Naseebo Laal, gujjars might have liked it and we just were hating (laughing) on it
Dont take negative but ap ki jo understanding hai us may aap ko maani he samjh aa jaien tu bohat hai..
Aap samundar na dhondain
2nd may nay ustad shuraa ki raye ka kaha hai k un say poch lain k wasi shah poets may tahir shah he hai…us ki eye to eye or is ka kangan to kangan…
3rd mat nay tu kaha he nai k may jisay acha bura kahoo aap loag bhi acha bura kahain… may tu sirf apnay argument ko support kar raha hoon…aap logon ki tarhan team bazi kar k support nai kar raha aik dosray ko
and with music and that too by Jagjeet Singh. If it had been sung by Naseebo Laal, gujjars might have liked it and we just were hating (laughing) on it
cute bhai… kisi ke baare main ye rae rakhna ke usse to meaning bhi nahin pata, is totally against poetic sense. Poetry subject to interpretation and personal likings. We do appreciate your contribution and expressing your views , but that doesn’t mean we will allow such personal remarks about any poster. For us all our posters are respectable and as you got right to express your views and likings, so is the case with others, and there is nothing like team-bazi… Wasi Shah koi hamara chacha Maama nahin.. and we all have criticised him a lot in many threads and all regular posters of poetry knows that.
may tu sirf apnay argument ko support kar raha hoon…aap logon ki tarhan team bazi kar k support nai kar raha aik dosray ko 
cute bhai… kisi ke baare main ye rae rakhna ke usse to meaning bhi nahin pata, is totally against poetic sense. Poetry subject to interpretation and personal likings. We do appreciate your contribution and expressing your views , but that doesn’t mean we will allow such personal remarks about any poster. For us all our posters are respectable and as you got right to express your views and likings, so is the case with others, and there is nothing like team-bazi… Wasi Shah koi hamara chacha Maama nahin.. and we all have criticised him a lot in many threads and all regular posters of poetry knows that.